Showing posts with label Deep characters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Deep characters. Show all posts

Thursday, July 9, 2020

Who Are You? By Patti Jo Moore

Many years ago, I was in a local store with my three children. A nice lady approached us, greeting me enthusiastically and asking how I’d been. The more she talked, the more obvious it became she knew me. She did most of the talking, and a few minutes later, we went our separate ways. When we’d gotten further away, my oldest daughter whispered to me, “Who was she?” I shook my head and replied, “I have no idea. No idea at all.”

Later we laughed about that incident, although I never figured out where I’d met her. But it was likely at one of the schools where I’d taught, or maybe she’d visited my church. Or we could’ve chatted at a Little League baseball game. Yet as she’d chattered away in a friendly tone, I could not bring myself to ask, “Who are you?”

Thinking about that incident recently made me think about my fictional story characters, and how important it is for me to “know” them. The more I learn about my characters, the more believable they can be in my stories. Beginning with a “Character Information” sheet for each main character, I jot down the basics: Physical appearance, Age, Education and job, family and friends, pets, hobbies, and so on. But I need to know more than these basics—I must know what my characters’ goals are, what motivates her/him, and what fears they have. And of course, there will be conflict for the characters in the story (confession: I still have a difficult time adding enough conflict, although I know it’s essential in stories!).

Some writers begin with a special setting in mind, others have their character(s) already formed, while other writers have a really good plot idea. Many writers have detailed plots and outlines of their stories before they actually begin writing. I admire these writers! But I am in the SOTP (“Seat of the Pants”) group, because for me personally, the joy in writing comes in discovering what happens next as my story progresses. Yet, I still *must* know my characters. And yes, even when a writer knows the character, that character can still “surprise” us sometimes. I become almost giddy when I’m writing, and a character says or does something that I didn’t expect. 😊

Again, for me personally, that’s the joy of writing fiction.

My current manuscript is almost completed, and then I’ll send it to my editor. I’ve been working (off and on) with this particular story since last Fall, but just haven’t been satisfied. Something was missing. A few days ago, a very important detail about my heroine came to me—something she’d been through in her past that has impacted how she feels now. Aha! “I wish you’d told me sooner, but that’s okay.” (No, I didn’t speak this aloud, only in my writer mind, LOL). But I knew that detail was what I needed to complete her journey in this story.

Even as I work hard on getting to know my characters, and enjoy writing about their individual journeys, I strive to remember that I always want my words to honor God. After all, He is the Master Storyteller!

And whatsoever ye do, do it heartily, as to the Lord, and not unto men. Colossians 3:23

A few days ago, a very important detail about my heroine came to me—something she’d been through in her past that has impacted how she feels now. Aha! “I wish you’d told me sooner, but that’s okay.”



...I strive to remember that I always want my words to honor God.





Sadie's Dream

In a coastal Georgia town in 1900, a young woman prepares to serve as a missionary in Africa.

After being jilted the previous year, she's certain she's meant to remain single.

When she meets a handsome businessman from Savannah, she begins struggling with doubts.

Over time she learns that the Lord's plans are best, and dreams really can come true.

Patti Jo Moore is a retired kindergarten teacher and lifelong Georgia girl. She loves Jesus, her family, cats, and coffee, and is blessed to be published with Forget-Me-Not Romances. When she’s not spending time with her family (including her two sweet grandbabies) or writing her “Sweet, Southern Stories” Patti Jo can be found feeding cats—her own six and local strays.

She loves connecting with readers and other writers, and can be found on Facebook at Author Patti Jo Moore or her personal blog at http://catmomscorner.blogspot.com

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

A Simple Way to Deepen Your Characters: Part Two

 

Happy Wednesday my writing friends,

Last week we talked about how family relationships add depth and intensity to our characters because of shared experiences, deep pain, forgiveness, and expectations. This week, let’s dig into the dynamics of the sister relationship.

More than a Friend
I tend to think of my female protagonists as needing friends, or at least one friend to share secrets with. But how much more intense if the sidekick isn’t just a friend, but a sister?

At first glance, I imagine a sister relationship filled with fun—shopping, giggling, makeovers. And I think these sisterly activities are great ways to clue readers in, but I know, with sisters there’s a deeper intensity. It’s important to remember three characteristics:

First, sisters tend to view each other in a certain social order. I’m the youngest. No matter how old I get, my sisters will still see me as that naïve, immature, obnoxious little sister—at least to some degree. On the flip side of this, no matter how independent or confident I am in my normal world, as soon as I enter sister land, I accept the naïve little sister role—or I have to intentionally try not to. Why is that? I don’t know, but I’m using it the next time I write sisters!

Sister Tip: Create a scene in which your strong, independent protagonist is brought down a notch by a sister.

Second, sisters fight. Unless we’re really close, I don’t think most of us bicker and argue with our girlfriends. But with sisters, there’s a safety about fighting. Sisters feel a freedom to express opinions, nag, bicker, complain—always knowing the sister bond won’t be broken. It takes a lot to break that bond.

Sister Tip: Think about how the sisters in your story fight? Do they yell, use passive-aggressive barbs, nag constantly? Show in a scene, but don’t forget to include that moment when the frustration settles and the sister-bond remains. Be sure to use your emotion-evoking skills.

Third, sisters are loyal. This one strikes a chord, doesn’t it? When I had my cardiac arrest a couple years ago, even though we’d lost touch for a while, when I woke up, my sisters were there, smiling, laughing, and making me feel loved. No matter what drags our heroines down, a sister will come alongside to support, help, love. Or…not. Loyalty between sisters rings so true, breaking it would be an incredible premise for a character.

Sister Tip: How can you show loyalty between sisters in such a way it resonates to your readers?

What observations have you made about sisters? Can they be integrated into our stories? I’d love to hear.

God bless and happy writing,

Ocieanna

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Wednesday, November 7, 2012

A Simple Way to Deepen Your Characters




Happy Wednesday, my writing friends,

Deep, multi-layered characters hook readers, am I right? I know this, and I’ve heard and read lots about it over the years. Typical advice: don't be nice to my characters, find out what lie they believe, figure out what they want and why they can’t have it.

Yes! These are great words of wisdom, which I try to follow, but recently I’ve noticed another way to create that intensity.

Family.

Mainly from being sucked in to TV dramas (some have pretty good character development), I’m learning to see how important—maybe even critical—family relationships are for my characters. There’s a universal understanding of the heart connections here. The hurts pierce deeply; the joyful bonding resonates intensely. And if I can be purposeful about my hero's and heroine's connections to family, perhaps I can add that intensity to my story.

Shared Experiences
No one knows what we’ve been through like our family. “Remember how mom used to…” or “I’ll never forget that road trip…” Common memories signal a unique love we all long for.

Deep Pain
For most of us, those closest to us caused our deepest pain from the past. Consequently, loved ones also have the greatest propensity for future potential hurt. With family we’re at our most vulnerable.  

Forgiveness
Let’s face it, who have we hurt more than our very own parents, siblings, or children? A longing for forgiveness, or the relief of receiving it, molds who we are, building either confidence or insecurities.
 
Expectations
All family relationships come with certain expectations. I expect my husband to protect me both physically and emotionally. I expect him to cherish me and love me. If he falls short of these things, it hurts! Same with parents. We expect them to be supportive and loving, but how heartbreaking when father ignores a son or a mother calls a daughter fat?

Can you see the potential for our characters? What a wealth of emotion just wating for us to tap into!

Each family relationship—parent/child; sibling/sibling, grandparent/grandchild—touches on these emotional hot buttons in different ways. Next week we’ll explore how these specific relationships impact our stories.
 
How have you used family relationships to deepen your characters? I'd love to hear.
 
God bless and happy writing!
Ocieanna

 

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