Showing posts with label contests. Show all posts
Showing posts with label contests. Show all posts

Thursday, June 18, 2020

Releasing Your Debut in the Middle of a Pandemic by Connie Queen

Thank you Terri Weldon and Seriously Write for inviting me today. 

I submitted my first story in 1999 to a Harlequin editor and was rejected. I kept writing and entering a ridiculous number of contests on and off for the next twenty years. I had my very own Wall of Fame with my framed contest finals. Okay, a lot of that time I was raising 8 kids and not getting much, if any, writing done.

Thursday, August 13, 2015

Writing - A Love Hate Relationship by Terri Weldon

Terri Weldon
Over the weekend I looked back on my writing journey. By traditional standards I’ve not been successful. I’ve had one book published and countless rejections. There were times the rejections made me want to quit writing. Last year was an especially trying year for me. I reached a point where I wondered if I’d ever see another book published. I just wanted to give up. Thankfully, with the help of a few good friends I made it past that hurdle.

Oh, I still haven’t gotten another book contract, but I’ve made good strides and I have a different mindset now. Plus, I’ve had some good feedback on my writing. I placed well with two manuscripts I entered in a contest and I had a request for a full on a different manuscript from a publisher. Now all those things may lead to nothing and while they were nice affirmations I’d like to think I’d grown as a Christian and a writer. Maybe if I ignore the pity party I threw when I failed to get a request from a publisher and agent I REALLY REALLY wanted I can say I have. Let me tell you, that was quite a party. Bet you’ve never seen such an awesome pity fest. LOL.

On a whole the part of writing that made me hate it was when my middle sagged so bad it dragged the ground. Or when I was halfway through the book and all out of plot. Or when I needed to write 60 thousand words and the end came at 50 thousand. And let’s not even talk about the critiques that said your heroine is so mean she’d kick a puppy. Ouch! These are the times that make me want to bang my head against the keyboard. Let me interject a quick note here, I’ve worked hard to soften my heroines. They are no longer so mean.

But there are times I love writing! That moment when a new idea zings into my mind or when the research for a series becomes fun and exciting. When the middle of the book doesn’t sag and the glorious moment when I type THE END! Those are moments I love, but nothing is better than when I’ve typed a scene and I go back and reread it later and those are God’s words, not mine. Because I see His mercy in that line, an understanding He can offer, not me.

So while I still have my love hate relationship with writing, I’d have to say these days I love it far more than I hate it.

How about you? Do you have a love hate relationship with writing? What drives you to hate to write? And if you’ve managed to overcome the hate side and it is all love please share how you did it. I’d love to hear your responses so please leave a comment about your experiences.

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Misty Winslow is determined to find her prince, and she meets the man of her dreams through an Internet dating service. Or is he, because the new dentist in town also sets her heart aflutter.

It's love at first sight for Tyler Davenport, but before he can finish his first root canal, Misty is involved in an exclusive online romance with Wes99—Tyler’s online persona. How can he tell her he’s the man she’s been waiting to meet, and how rational is it for him to be jealous of Wes99! Soon Tyler's pulling out all the stops to woo Misty.

As Christmas approaches, Wes99 and Tyler both ask her to meet them under the mistletoe. Which man will she choose?

Terri is a lead analyst by day and an author by night. She enjoys gardening, reading, and playing in the hand bell choir. One of her favorite pastimes is volunteering as the librarian at her church. It allows her to shop for books and spend someone else’s money! Plus, she has the great joy of introducing people to Christian fiction.

She lives with her family in Oklahoma. Terri has three dogs – a lovable mutt and two adorable Westies.

Terri is a member of ACFW and OCFW, a local chapter of ACFW. Her dream of becoming a published novelist came true in November 2013 when Mistletoe Magic, released from White Rose Publishing. To learn more about Terri visit her website at www.TerriWeldon.com.

Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Dream Big! by Susan Anne Mason

Susan Anne Mason
I think I know how actors feel when they finally get that breakout movie that thrusts them into the spotlight. Suddenly they have ‘made it’, and people call them an overnight success — even if they’ve been acting for years. Like them, I had been writing for years, getting rejection after rejection, when suddenly everything seemed to happen at once.

In August 2013, I entered my historical romance, Irish Meadows, in a contest and prepared my pitch for the September ACFW Conference. Sadly, my appointments seemed a waste of time. I found no interest for my book, and in fact, received a lot of negative comments and advice. Yet I wasn’t discouraged. I had confidence that when the time was right, God would give me the desire of my heart.

Meanwhile in October 2013, I got the wonderful news that two of my contemporary stories would be published by a small publisher called White Rose. During the following excitement, all thoughts of Irish Meadows got pushed to the background while I concentrated on revisions and galleys for these two books scheduled for release in August and December, 2014.

Then in early 2014, I found out that Irish Meadows had won the contest I entered, and an editor from Bethany House asked to see my manuscript! He loved it!! And in March 2014, I received an offer from BETHANY HOUSE for 3 historical romances! This book of my heart had now expanded to a three-book series! I could not believe it!

Imagine my shock when within a week of this astounding news, I learned that Harlequin’s Love Inspired line wanted to buy one of my contemporary romances! Now I had THREE contracts with 3 different publishers!

I hope my story gives hope and encouragement to other aspiring authors out there!! Keep trying, keep sowing the seeds that will eventually reap the harvest. It only takes one person to love your writing!

Persistence, hard work, and faith! Three key elements for anything you wish to achieve! And remember that God can dream a bigger dream for us than we can ever imagine! So don’t give up!
About the Author
Susan Anne Mason describes her writing style as “romance sprinkled with faith.” She particularly enjoys exploring the themes of forgiveness and redemption in her stories. Irish Meadows is her first historical novel and won the Fiction from the Heartland contest sponsored by the Mid-American Romance Author chapter of RWA.

Susan lives outside of Toronto, Ontario, with her husband, two children, and two cats. She is a member of American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW) and Romance Writers of America (RWA). Learn more about Susan and her books at www.susanannemason.com.
Irish Meadows
by Susan Anne Mason

Irish Meadows
Irish immigrant, James O’Leary, has spent his life building Irish Meadows into a thriving horse farm and is not about to let hard economic times threaten its success. He intends for his daughters to marry prosperous men—ones who will secure the family’s rightful place in society, and at the same time, guarantee the future of Irish Meadows. Both girls, however, have different visions for their futures.

Brianna and Colleen O’Leary know their father expects them to marry well. Yet despite his wishes, Brianna, the quieter sister, dreams of attending college. Vivacious Colleen, meanwhile, is happy to marry—as long as her father’s choice meets her exacting standards. When stable hand Gilbert Whelan returns from college and distant family member Rylan Montgomery stops in on his way to the seminary in Boston, the two men quickly complicate everyone’s plans. It will take every ounce of courage for both sisters to follow their hearts. And even if they do, will they inevitably find their dreams too distant to reach?

Links:
Webpage: www.susanannemason.com
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/susan.mason.127
FB Author page: https://www.facebook.com/susan.anne.mason.333
Amazon :
http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_1_10?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=susan+anne+mason&sprefix=susan+anne%2Cstripbooks%2C352

Monday, April 22, 2013

Invisibility is Good


“The story in this book is fantastic!” Rowlf exploded. “I can’t put it down.”

“Oh really?” Cyndy interrogated. “I found it annoying to read because of all of the oddball speaker attributions.”

“That’s because you have no vision,” Rowlf interjected. “This writer is being experimental.”

“I guess I just miss the old ways,” the older woman sighed. “When writers used their descriptive powers to set the scene, including the character’s emotions. The days when they took time to show the scene and the emotion rather than just rushing to tell it.”

“You never ‘get’ the books I read,” Rowlf spat.

Does the above dialogue annoy you? Are you thinking people don’t write like that anymore because everyone knows better?

Sorry, you’d be wrong.

I’m proofediting a book right now for a publisher that is full of attributions just like these. It also has no discernible POV (point of view), switching within scenes to whatever character is most convenient at the time (head hopping)—or even to omniscient.

It’s full of huge grey patches of monologue, where one character speaks for a half page of backstory rather than the normal give and take, back and forth, of real dialogue. And there’s precious little character development—it’s all very cardboard.

How did this book get on this publisher’s list? It has a fantastic “what if?” The story is to die for, but the execution is ham-handed.

But, this is not a post about story trumping all. Nor is it about POV, character development, or backstory. This is about speaker attributions. For me, these are the major problem of this book.

In Renni Browne and Dave King’s Self-editing for Fiction Writers, (Note: You do have this book, right?) they write:
“The only reason you need (speaker attributions) is so your readers know who is saying what. Don’t use (them) as a way of slipping in explanations of your dialogue (“he growled,” “she snapped”). …
“Your best bet is to use the verb said almost without exception.”

Why is this so? Because said disappears in the reader’s mind and allows the characters to speak. Anything else causes the reader to look at the attribution rather than the dialogue and pulls the reader out of your story.

And when you’ve done that, you’ve shown the reader your mechanics, not your creativity.

I can’t fix the book I’ve referenced—I’m just proofediting it. But I can’t help thinking how much better it would be, other faults aside, if the attributions were fixed.

Don’t do this to your editors. When it comes to attributions, invisibility is good.

Your turn: It can be fun to play with attributions, however. So, let’s get it out of our systems! In the comments, provide an example of horrendous dialogue, complete with very bad (but creative!) attributions. The winner will receive his or her choice of: Donald Maass’ Writing the Breakout Novel or A Novel Idea, a compendium of advice from the biggest names in the inspirational fiction market.

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Michael Ehret loves to play with words and as editor of the ACFW Journal, he is enjoying his playground. He also plays with words as a freelance editor at WritingOnTheFineLine.com, where he often takes a writer Into The Edit, pulling back the veil on the editing process. He has edited several nonfiction books, played with words as a corporate communicator, and reported for The Indianapolis Star.

Monday, March 18, 2013

The Gift by Peter Leavell



Peter Leavell
Happy Monday, everyone! Annette here. Raise your hand if you're an ACFW member, and/or you've ever entered a writing contest. Yes, I see those hands. ACFW's Genesis Contest 2013 just closed for entries. Did you enter this year? I've entered that contest and others over the years and received feedback on my writing. Oh, the judges' remarks can be hard to hear. Sometimes, devastating. But after we've processed their words for a few days, I'm guessing we might find some truth to their words. Peter Leavell is back today with some great advice about finding the good in the lessons of life.

The Gift 
by Peter Leavell

All bad things come with lessons. It can soften the blow if you look at it as a gift.

One winter, I took my family to our favorite hotel in the mountains. It’s our getaway, with snow, pines, a railway, a fire, and all the hot cocoa you can drink. We play card games and read.

But it’s cold in our mountain valley. The windshield is always iced over. So when it was time to go home, as I loaded our car, I let my (at the time) eight-year-old daughter scrape the windshield.

She did a terrible job. Just awful. I hunkered my head down to see through the dime-sized hole she’d opened through the frost. It was enough, I thought, to see the road ahead. I pushed away my wife’s advice that I wait and scrape it myself, assuring myself I wasn’t lazy—I just didn’t want to hurt my daughter’s feelings by “fixing”’ her work. She was proud to have helped Daddy.

Flashing Lights

By the time we made it out of Cascade, our little resort town nestled in the mountains, the viewing area had expanded to the size of a quarter. I checked behind me, noting that the rear defrosters always works so much faster in ten-below-zero weather, and then spotted the flashing lights.

I pulled over, and the officer waited while my electric window whined and screamed its way down. He was laughing.

“You have got to be kidding me. Your windshield….”

I gave an embarrassed smile and nodded. He asked for my license and registration, and told me to fix it. I scraped away the rest of the ice, and for good measure, the headlights, side windows, and side mirrors.

When he returned, he patted me on the back and told me to have a nice day. I closed the door and gave a sigh of relief. No ticket.

Heartbroken for a Reason

After two minutes of driving down the road and some small talk, my daughter burst into tears. Her sobs made me want to cry.

“Oh sweetie, what’s wrong?”

“I got you in trouble, Daddy.”

It took a while to comfort her, but we finally helped her understand it was truly my fault.

A few weeks later, I was speaking with my friend on our local police force, Officer Ellis. When I told him about my daughter crying, he nodded his head. “Good.”

What? How could my daughter being in tears EVER be good?

Because, he explained, it’s a lesson learned the easy way. One she won’t forget. Her windshield will be clean her entire life.

Even though my daughter was crushed by the incident, she took away the lesson, or as we call it in our family, the gem behind the catastrophe.

Toughest Challenge

A few months later, my son’s soccer buddy, age 13, killed himself. As a challenge, we decided to look for the gift that the boy gave us, the gem. If we could find it in this tragedy, surely everything could teach us. My son, devastated but determined, thought for weeks. Finally, he looked back on how he was living his twelfth year of life, and found he was giving God every day since his buddy died. Because every moment mattered. It’s been almost a year, and my son still takes on each day as if it is his last.

So when our writing is rejected, or we lose a contest, or we’re critiqued to the ends of our strength, look for the gift, the gem. There is one. Take it, and be a better writer, better person. For those around you, but most of all, for Him. 

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Author Peter Leavell forges an unprecedented tale of tragedy and triumph amid the backdrop of the Civil War through the story of Tad, a very clever slave boy who comes of age as America’s war reaches the sea islands of South Carolina. Tad’s desire to better himself is obstructed by the color of his skin, until Northern soldiers force the evacuation of white plantation owners, setting 10,000 slaves free in a single day. These circumstances seem like a dream, except that the newly freed slaves have no money, no education, and little hope for the future—unless someone rises up to lead them. Based on true events, Gideon’s Call is the dramatic tale of a young man who battles the shame of his past and faces the horrors of war and unimaginable prejudice to become the deliverer of thousands of freed slaves.

Peter Leavell, a 2007 graduate of Boise State University with a degree in history, was the 2011 winner of Christian Writers Guild's Operation First Novel contest. Peter and his family live in Boise, Idaho. For entertainment, he reads historical books, where he finds ideas for new novels. Whenever he has a chance, he takes his wife and two homeschooled children on crazy but fun research trips. Learn more about Peter's books, research, and family adventures at www.peterleavell.com and on his Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/PeterLeavell.

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Monday, June 13, 2011

Mixing it Up Mondays


Hey readers, your hostesses are in the process of making some changes here at Seriously Write. Last week we asked for feedback on what you'd like to see. (Feel free to still chime in on that.) This week, Ocieanna Fleiss is gearing up for her return and would like your questions.

What have you wanted to know about writing (writing craft, editing, etc.), but you haven't found the answer? Here's your chance to have Ocieanna address it. She's published with Summerside, so if you have questions about publishing, ask away! Soon, she'll launch her Ask-O day here on Seriously Write and your question could be first. Leave comments here throughout June to participate.

Ocieanna has edited multiple manuscripts and has contributed writing articles to NCWA's author newsletter for years. Her insightful way of addressing writing questions is both humorous and useful. She's the ideal critique partner because she gets the writing process from both the writing and the editing perspective. That makes a great coach.

Other changes are coming, including contest info. Stay tuned to Mondays in June for more.

Thanks, dear readers!