Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Writing Books in a Series by Amanda Cabot

Amanda Cabot
First there were sequels. Then came trilogies. Now quartets and even quintets are popping up. It seems that everywhere you look, authors are creating series of books, and more and more publishers are asking for them. If you’re thinking about joining the bandwagon, read on. There are a few things to consider before you get started.

Type of Series
Did you know there’s more than one kind of series? While others may disagree with the terminology, I divide them into two categories: continuing characters and connected characters. What’s the difference? In a continuing character series, the protagonists remain the same, while secondary characters and sometimes settings change. Think of Nancy Drew, Miss Marple and, more recently, Harry Potter. In each case, you know who the main character is, and part of the pleasure of reading one of these books is knowing that when you finish it, there will be another adventure coming, featuring your favorite people. Plot-driven books like mysteries, thrillers and suspense make ideal continuing character series.

Connected character series are different. In them, when the first book ends, those protagonists’ stories are complete, but seeds have been sown for at least one secondary character to star in a subsequent book. It’s common, but not mandatory, for the protagonists of one book to make cameo appearances in the next one. Although settings may vary from one book to the next, it is also possible that the setting itself becomes a character. That’s what happened with my Texas Dreams series. In addition to the connected characters, with the heroes of the second and third books each being introduced in the previous book, the town of Ladreville and a cast of secondary characters formed a common thread. In the Westward Winds series, the primary connection is that the heroines of the three books are sisters. A few secondary characters continue from one book to the next, but the links are more subtle than in the Texas books. Character-driven books like romances and general fiction are good candidates for connected character series.

Number of Books
Once you’ve decided which type of series is right for you, the next question is to decide how many books will comprise that series. In the case of continuing characters, the answer is frequently “I don’t know.” That’s because those series are often open-ended. Connected character series, however, are typically finite. Since trilogies seem to be particularly popular now, my recommendation is to think in terms of three books. And, even if you’re writing a continuing character series, I’d suggest including at least three books in your initial proposal so that there’s no question that it’s a series.

The Challenges
Although there are many challenges associated with writing a series, for me, three stand out.
  1. Maintain consistency from book to book. Readers are intelligent. They’ll remember that Susie had green eyes in Book One, and if those suddenly change to brown in Book Two, unless you mention that she’s wearing colored contacts, your reader will be disappointed in you. I keep a chart with all characters’ ages, hair and eye colors and other dominant characteristics.

    If you’re using the same location from book to book, I highly recommend having a map that shows where houses, rivers and other landmarks are located. Once again, readers will notice if you change the street names between books. Even if you’re using a real town, it’s important to know where the characters live so that you’re consistent.
  2. Create each book as a stand-alone. I know, I know. We’re talking about books in a series, so why am I suggesting that each one be a stand-alone? For me, there’s nothing more frustrating than picking up the second book in a series and feeling as if I’m a stranger at a party where everyone else knows each other. They’re all talking about people and events that are unfamiliar to me. If you write each book with the idea that it can stand alone, you’ll make readers happy. The key is to ensure that each reference to a prior book has a brief explanation, bringing the reader “up to speed.” The challenge, of course, is to not give away key plot points from previous books. Is it easy? Of course not. That’s why it’s a challenge.
  3. Make each book as compelling as the previous one. For me, this is the most difficult challenge of all. I’ve read so many trilogies, including some written by New York Times bestselling authors, where the first and third books were excellent, but the middle one fell short that I started asking why. Was this an extreme case of the sagging middles that we’re all told to avoid? Was it like sophomore slump? I suspect part of the problem is that, as authors, we’re excited about the first book, but when we get to the second, we’re anxious to finish the series, and the second book suffers. Don’t let that happen.
I wish I could give you concrete advice on how to avoid the middle book doldrums. All I can say is to be aware that this is a potential problem and one that afflicts even bestselling authors. If you have critique partners, ask them whether this book is as good as the previous one, and if the answer isn’t the one you wanted, ask yourself what you can do to improve it. Your readers expect excellence. Don’t disappoint them.

For me, although there are undeniable challenges involved, writing books in a series is great fun. I love the challenge of creating a town and peopling it with interesting characters, then returning to it a second and third time. I love introducing characters in one book, then following them into a second book. I love every aspect of it except one: saying good-bye.

Writing books in a series can be a fulfilling experience. If you’re at all intrigued by the idea, I encourage you to try it.

From the time that she was seven, Amanda Cabot dreamed of becoming a published author, but it was only when she set herself the goal of selling a book by her thirtieth birthday that the dream came true. A former director of Information Technology, Amanda has written everything from technical books and articles for IT professionals to mysteries for teenagers and romances for all ages. She’s delighted to now be a fulltime writer of Christian historical romances. Her Texas Dreams trilogy received critical acclaim, and Waiting for Spring, the second in her Westward Winds series, was just released.

Waiting for Spring by Amanda Cabot
Waiting for Spring
Almost a year ago, Charlotte had a baby and lost a husband. Hearing that a notorious robber believes she knows the location of a long lost treasure, she flees to Cheyenne and opens a dressmaker’s shop to make a living. When wealthy cattle baron and political hopeful Barrett Landry enters her shop with his lovely fiancĂ©e, Charlotte’s heart betrays her. If Barrett is to be a senator of the soon-to-be state of Wyoming, he must make a sensible match, and the young woman on his arm has all the right connections. Yet he can’t shake the feeling that Charlotte is the woman who holds the key to his heart and his future.

Soon the past comes to call and Barrett’s plans crumble around him. Will Charlotte and Barrett find the courage to look love in the face? Or will their fears blot out any chance for happiness?

Monday, January 14, 2013

The Power of Polish: Part 1 by Anita Higman


Anita Higman

Hey everyone, Annette here. How is your writing going? I'm currently in the process of editing two projects (my own). Do you have checklists that help you in those read-through stages? This month, Anita Higman is here with a series of items she uses in her self-editing process. We'll spread the list out for the next three weeks so you can take your time working through the items. Write (er, edit) on!

The Power of Polish, Part 1
by Anita Higman


Robert Louis Stevenson said, “There is but one art, to omit.” He obviously appreciated the power of polish. I call polishing powerful, because it has the ability to transform a rough draft into something remarkable—something salable. After I complete a rough draft I go over it quite a few times, checking for problems, large and small. Here are a few power-polishers from my personal list:


  • Did I sprinkle in backstory like a fine spice or did I dump the whole jar in at the beginning?
  • Do my characters have plenty of quirks and ticks like real people?
  • If I repeated words are they beautifully rhythmic or just annoyingly repetitious?
  • Is it clear which characters are talking, or will readers need to stop to figure it out?
  • If I altered anything midway—a character’s hair color, the season of the year, etc.—did I make those changes all the way through the manuscript?
  • Did I check each “was” and “were” as well as other potentially scrawny verbs? Do some of them need to be removed from the herd?
  • Is the word “that” used so much that readers will become so weary of that that they’ll want to use my novel for kindling?
  • Have I included literary devices such as sensory details, foreshadowing, irony, metaphors, and similes to give my story depth and delight?
  • Did I dip so randomly and deeply into the barrel of limp and colorless adjectives and adverbs that my prose came out hopelessly anemic?
  • Are the elements of action, description, and dialogue balanced in my story?
  • Is my point of view consistent, or will I confuse readers by head-hopping?
  • Is the setting in each scene well-defined?
  • Are my characters unforgettable and believable, or are they one-dimensional and uninspiring because I haven’t spent enough time getting to know them?
I hope these items have helped. Take your time working through the list. Next time, I'll share a few more.


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CBA bestselling and award-winning author, Anita Higman, has over thirty books published (several coauthored) for adults and children. She’s been a Barnes & Noble “Author of the Month” for Houston and has a BA degree, combining speech communication, psychology, and art. Her latest books are A Merry Little Christmas (Guideposts/Summerside Press) and Where God Finds You (Standard Publishing). Anita loves good movies, exotic teas, and making brunch for her friends. Please visit her online at www.anitahigman.com. 


Texas Wildflowers

Romance is in full bloom for four McBride sisters living in Texas. A jilted Rosy goes home to Galveston to nurture her broken heart. Will she find the courage to love again? Lily has just opened a Christian counseling business. Will an eccentric client cause her to break the most solemn of vows? Violet runs a business that shows people how to live romantically. Will a quirky geek teach her the real meaning of love? Heather’s perfectly planned life has just come undone. Will an unexpected date give her the courage to let go—in life and love?




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Friday, January 11, 2013

Making a Difference by Anne Elisabeth Stengl

As we move into the new year, we may contemplate specific goals we want to reach in 2013. Some may relate to our writing careers. What is it that we really want to accomplish? For years, I’ve experienced a drive—a need—to make sure my life has purpose. Those feelings spill over into hopes and dreams pertaining to writing. Today on Fortifying Friday, author Anne Elisabeth Stengl shares what she’s learned about making a difference as a writer. It’s a lesson I want to embrace. How about you? ~ Dawn


Making a Difference
by Anne Elisabeth Stengl

“It's a big scary world. And I am one small girl. What difference can I make?”

This question is such an exciting one for fiction writers. The whole point of fiction, after all, is to take unprepared characters and throw them into a scary situation, be that a murder mystery, an epic quest, a romance, or a coming-of-age. But stepping out of the literary world back into this place we call "reality," the question becomes much more frightening.

When I began my writing career, I didn't realize just how frightening this question was. I was inexperienced and enthusiastic. I assumed that of course I would make a major difference and everyone would notice and be wowed.

Six manuscripts, four novels, two contracts, and two major awards later, the question, “What difference can I make?” has become a lot more difficult to face. With each novel I produce, I face the overwhelming frustration that is negative reviews . . . people who simply do not get my work, who don't understand what I'm trying to say, who dislike my characters. I face reviewers who will vehemently argue that fantasy has no place in the Christian market and shouldn't be encouraged in our publishing houses. I face bloggers who declare the omniscient narrative—my style of choice—a “publishing travesty” and will do everything they can to sling mud at my work and discredit me among my peers.

Literary awards, critical acclaim, and a majority of favorable reviews do nothing to counterbalance the hurt of each of these negative digs. Every time I write a novel, I place my heart on the line, offering it to those who will read. And every time, there will be those who turn up their noses in disgust, leaving me to wonder again, tearfully, “What difference can I make?”

And of course, the answer is, “None at all.”

Because this career is not about me making a difference. I am too small, and I am too weak. Even the story ideas ultimately don't stem from a source of inspiration inside me.

Year by year, manuscript by manuscript, God has used this career of mine to illustrate to me that this work is His work. Not mine. These ideas, these bursts of creative inspiration . . . they are a gift of His divine provision. Just as He provides my daily bread, He graciously bestows upon me His daily inspiration. This creativity, which is such a vital part of my existence, is not self-sprung or self-maintained. It is by God's grace alone that I am a storyteller.

Every day He reminds me that I can make no difference. But He can make all the difference. He can prepare the hearts of those He means to touch through my fairy tales. He can whisper the inspiration into my heart, the words that readers--His beloved children--need to hear.

So in this truth be fortified, fellow storytellers. You will never make the difference. And, as it turns out, that is good!



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Anne Elisabeth Stengl is the author of the Tales of Goldstone Wood, a series of fantasy adventure novels told in the classic Fairy Tale style. She is married to the handsome man she met at fencing class and lives with him, a gaggle of cats, and one long-suffering dog in NC. Her novels include Heartless, Veiled Rose, Moonblood, Starflower, with Dragonwitch due to release summer 2013. Both Heartless and Veiled Rose have been honored with Christy Awards.

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Thursday, January 10, 2013

Pantser to Plotter...Now What? by Dora Hiers

Last week we talked about my decision to migrate from Pantser to Plotter. Now what?

As a Pantser (not under contract), you have flexibility in your schedule. You may have a daily word count goal, but without a deadline, it doesn't really matter if you reach your goal. You can make up for it the next day or just extend the length of time it takes to write the book.

But what happens when you become a Plotter and submit a proposal for books that aren't yet written? A component of the proposal requires a completion date. How do you come up with a time frame to complete the books?

Hmmm...

A calendar? 

Calendar
Not the ideal solution. Especially when you're working on multiple books. There's just no easy way to adjust your schedule, if it becomes necessary. 

A timeline would work. One with the capability to insert tasks by book and keep a running word count total. You can google timeline and you’ll find hundreds of options. Be sure to pop back over here and let me know if you find something that works for you. I didn't.

Instead, I chose to create a fairly basic Excel document with the date, book title, task, word goal, and a running total. Starting with a realistic weekly word count, I mapped out each book, dividing the weekly goal into a targeted daily word count, taking into consideration vacations and holidays. I used "fill color" to highlight different books, so that I can easily decipher the transition from one book to the next. I add my word count for each day, and adjust if necessary. Now, I have completion dates for each book in my proposal.

It's not perfect, either, but it works for now. Here are some pros:

Accountability. A daily goal keeps me focused and on track. I completed my first book a few days ahead of schedule. 

Time saver. With the plotting already done, I know the direction the story needs to go, which saves time daily.

Freedom. When I accomplish my goal early, I’m free to work on other tasks or keep writing. It’s my choice.

Accomplishment. A sweet feeling, right?


And only one negative so far:

Pressure. So far, I’ve experienced only one negative. If you’re having a tough writing day and the words aren’t flowing, it’s tough not to get discouraged or feel the pressure. On these days, I really hunker down to keep at it. Some days I might type only dialog if that’s flowing better, or switch to action beats and what’s happening. If that still doesn’t work, I regroup by working on another writerly task and try to compensate my word count during the week. But, that’s a last resort.
It's your turn. 

If you're a Plotter, which organizational software works well for you?

After an injury forces Deputy U.S. Marshal Sage Michaelson off duty, he heads to his hometown with two things on his mind: recuperating and reevaluating, but Sage can’t refuse his best friend’s plea to keep a protective eye on his little sister after someone ransacks her house. But Delaney’s not so little anymore—and definitely not the young “Dane” Sage remembers. 

Flight Medic Delaney Hunt has loved Sage forever. But, he’s all about control and order while she embraces life and takes risks. As much as the idea appeals to her, she doesn’t need Sage looking over her shoulder. But when things go wrong and she finds herself hanging by her fingertips, who does she call to rescue her?

Will Delaney ever be the woman Sage wants by his side? Can Sage learn to live by grace, recognizing that God is in control? Can they overcome their fears to embrace life together?

Journey's Embrace ~ Coming March 1st!