Thursday, June 28, 2012

Key Writing Tip



Hey writers, Annette here. I have a very important piece of advice for you today. Very important. So important and so obvious, you may have overlooked it. Lots of writers already do it. Can’t help themselves really. It comes naturally. And it makes sense since it’s of interest to them. 

What is it? 

Read in your genre. Read a lot in your genre. 

I’ve known a few writers over the years who were trying to publish their own manuscripts, but who boastfully proclaimed they hadn't read extensively in their chosen genre. Honestly, that just left them at a disadvantage, playing "catch up" when their editors asked for changes because they weren't familiar with what's out there.

When's the right time to read? Right now. Whether you're published or not, you can always benefit from reading in your genre.

Here’s what you gain:

~ Intel. You get to see firsthand what publishers are acquiring. That’s really helpful information. When/If you pitch to them later, you can site that specific book or series. Editors appreciate knowing you’ve read their house’s novels.

~ Wisdom. Writing workshops and how-to manuals teach you a lot. But reading, seeing those lessons on the page (or screen, for e-book readers) teaches you as well. Plus, it’s entertaining. Study how the author accomplished everything you find in those pages. For example, say you’re reading along and suddenly you’re crying because you’re so wrapped up in the story. Go back and figure out exactly how the writer got you, as the reader, to cry. What did she do? How did he do it? Then, incorporate your new lessons into your own writing. Also, by reading in your genre, you see how the author(s) set the tone of the novel, set the mood for the story, stayed true to the genre. And then you can do the same.

~  Reader’s perspective. You’re a writer, but you’re also a reader. While you’re reading someone else’s book, you’re experiencing something similar to what readers will experience when they read your book(s). As a reader, what are your expectations of books in your favorite genre? Now, as a writer, go to your own manuscript and incorporate those elements into your story. Giving readers what they want is a great way to garner their loyalty. Loyal readers are contagious. They talk up your books to their friends and suddenly, you’ve got more readers. Let the buzz begin!

~ Your own voice. Reading extensively helps us develop our own voice. Even if you have a well-established writing voice, reading will help you hone that voice. Ironically, you'll become more of an original, and that's what editors are looking for.

Read everything you can, and stay up-to-date with what’s being released. That way, you know the current trends as well. (Like how POV rules have changed over the years, or which house is looking for historical romance versus contemporary romance, for example.) 

So, my writing friends, read on!

Wednesday, June 27, 2012

I Couldn't Put It Down: Romance Part 4



Happy Wednesday, my writing friends!

This series has gone on longer than I expected. I must have more to say about romance than I thought. Today’s topic is suspense…

Note: I’m not talking about the genre of romantic suspense, but just injecting suspense in romance of any kind.

Have you ever read a book in which you were dying for the characters to get together? It’s so good, the wind of the turning pages hits you in the face. How do we do that? Here are a few suggestions.

The Accidental Touch
I use this early on, often before my characters know they care about each other. Imagine Hero and Heroine bickering on a boat dock. A wave rocks the dock, causing Heroine to fall into Hero’s arms. Bam! Tension, suspense. And omitting my characters’ reactions only adds to the suspense.

Unfinished Conversations
Hero’s and Heroine’s feelings have begun to bloom. Readers know they care about each other and need to confess their love. Hero begins to talk. His heart races. His hands sweat. Heroine leans in, ready to listen…

And an emergency interrupts. Ha ha ha! I’m so mean.

But a reader will have to keep reading, won’t she?

The Almost Touch
A little later in the story, they’re starting to give in to their attraction, yet still not quite sure how the other feels. Heroine trips, landing on her bum. Hero instinctively reaches to help her. Their eyes meet. Heroine’s hand moves toward his. They almost experience their first intentional touch, born of kindness—but then her father (or ex-boyfriend!) swoops in and grabs her hand instead.

So Close, Yet So Far
Emotions are boiling. Heroine aches in loneliness. She’s fought her feelings for so long, she’s weak and lonely, yet still determined to battle. And then, something throws Hero and Heroine together. They’re stuck in a storm, abandoned to an island, locked in an elevator. Oh how the reader longs for them to connect, to admit their feelings, to finally find happiness. But just when it looks like they might—ding ding. The elevator door opens and they’re swooped back into the real world.

End of Act Two Heartbreak
I know it’s formulaic, but it’s so powerful! At the end of Act Two, my characters break up. Something tears them apart with absolutely no hope of reconciliation. Their relationship is dead. My hope is that it’s so dead, readers curse me for leading them all this way only to have Hero and Heroine not end up together.

By now they’re so invested, they can’t help but keep reading. And then, the first scene of Act Three brings a wee hint of hope. (I don’t want my readers too frustrated!)

Are you catching why romance is so fun?

Next week I’ll finish up this series (Lord willing!) with my favorite part of all. (Can you guess what it is?)

Happy writing and God bless!

Ocieanna

How do you create suspense in your romance? I’d love to hear!




Tuesday, June 26, 2012

How to Get Inspired in a Less Than Colorful World by Devin Berglund


There are times when we come to a screeching dead halt in our writing, and we can’t seem to find any inspiration. During the times that we feel empty we look into the world for inspiration and find a world falling apart. We see soldiers fighting in wars across the seas, homeless people on the streets, and starving children in Africa. Then we find ourselves wondering how to get inspired.

I have found myself in this position many times and have wondered, how can I make a difference with my writing anyways? How do I get myself out of this situation? When these questions start to circle around in my mind I have a bad habit of leaving my computer. Which isn’t what I should do. Instead I should pull inspiration out of the un-colorful world. At this moment I can imagine that many questions are forming in your minds, like: “Devin, how do I stay inspired in a less than colorful world? How can I get inspiration when everything else around me is so uninspiring?” or something like, “How can I make color when I have none?”

These are some tough questions, but I do have answers for them. When I find myself in a funk and can’t get inspired I look deeper into the issue. That gives me inspiration and story ideas. With the soldiers who are fighting in wars across the sea, I find myself asking questions.Who are they? What are their stories? Were they married? What are their struggles and emotions? Asking this question actually inspired me when writing the short story “Christy Nelson’s Story” that I wrote for “New Branch of the Journey”.

As soon as I ask myself these questions my mind starts reeling with ideas, thoughts, characters, and plots. I want to make a difference in my reader’s lives and I know you do too. We need to remember that our less than colorful world needs our color, since we add color to the world with our words. Here are some ideas to help draw out inspiration when you don’t feel inspired.

1. Go for a walk in the wilderness
Nature has a way of bringing out the light, when you see all the issues that our world has, you get brought back to how our world should be.

“We can never have enough of nature. We must be refreshed by the sight of inexhaustible vigor, vast and titanic features, the sea-coast with its wrecks, the wilderness with its living and its decaying trees, the thunder-cloud, and the rain.” -Henry David Thoreau

My mom always told me that fresh air clears the mind and she was definitely right, besides you can get heaps of color just by stepping out into the woods. Listen to the sounds. What do you hear? What do you see? Look at all of the details.

2. Delve deeply into other things that will open your mind creatively
Do you practice another form of art? Paint? Music? Dance? Why not try something?

3. Get away from your normal setting
I am living in Brisbane, Australia (a big city if you are not familiar with it). Last weekend my boyfriend and I went to visit his Dad on the Sunshine Coast. We woke up early one morning to watch the sun rise over the Sunshine Coast. Escaping from the city inspires me, because I grew up in the country and was used to nature all around me. Something as small as getting away from your normal settings is a great way to find new ideas for stories, settings, and characters.

4. Get enough sleep
They say if you sleep enough hours in a night, that you will have a better chance of remembering your dreams. Dreams inspire! For one week I went to sleep earlier the night before and woke up earlier to write. I was amazed with how vivid my dreams were and how much easier I remembered them.

5. Get out and volunteer
Seeing good in tough situations can work wonders, it may even give you a new story idea. Use the emotions you see in people as well. Such as the pain in the homeless man’s eyes or the tears that come when you ask him how he is doing.

6. Emotion
Use the emotion you experience. Write about how you feel and how it affects you. You never know when that will help you with a character you are writing later. Keep a journal for this.

7. Silence
Go someplace and seek silence. Light some candles, pray, and meditate. Listen to relaxing music.

8. Take an online journey of inspiring blogs and websites
Check out inspiring pictures or my newest addiction = Pinterest. You can find interesting ideas for characters and settings on there.

9. Read a good book 
Check out Goodreads.com.

10. Change your outlook
When things are dark, dreary, or uninspiring change your point of view, change your outlook… Look at it from someone else’s shoes. Take a pen and paper someplace to watch people and write down their story or what you think is going on in their lives.

11. Ask yourself the hard questions
Best-selling author, Steven James, once said, “You don’t have a story until you have conflict.” Since we live in a world where conflicting things happen all the time, we must pull inspiration out of the darkness around us by asking ourselves the hard questions. When you know what your character wants then you can find out what will go against your character goals.

12. If you still don’t feel inspired...
Continue to show up and write every day! I try writing 2,000 words a day. There have been a few times that I hadn’t wanted to write, but I made myself. When I read over it later I was surprised with what I’d written!

How about you? What do you do to keep the inspiration flowing?


Devin Berglund is a writer from rural Minnesota. She is currently living in Brisbane, Australia where she is a freelance writer/designer. She majored in English/Mass Communications with a Certificate in Publishing from Minnesota State University of Moorhead. She also designed a book "New Branch of the Journey" with an independent publishing company. The story she was speaking about above is also included in the book. She is currently working on her first full-length novel and can’t wait to start her search for an agent and publisher.

Connect with Devin:
You can follow her on twitter: https://twitter.com/#!/devinberglund

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Monday, June 25, 2012

Deep POV: Lesson Four by Karen Witemeyer

We've been enjoying a great series here this month with award-winning author, Karen Witemeyer on deep POV. Here's her final installment this Mixing-it-up-Monday. Enjoy!

Deepen POV by Creating Fresh Comparisons

One of my favorite ways to deepen POV is to create fresh comparisons that are unique to my POV character's personality and background. 

If your hero is a western cowboy, the comparisons that mean something to him will be far different from those of a British nobleman. Similes, metaphors, analogies—all can be given a fresh spin that enhance your character's voice.

This is another aspect of craft that keeps you from getting lazy. Clichés are nearly always the first comparisons to come to mind when we write. Don't accept that easy road. Work to make your analogies unique to your POV character. In doing so, you will deepen the POV and create memorable moments for your reader.

Example:

In my latest release, Short-Straw Bride, there is a scene where my rancher hero is admiring the heroine's determination and gumption. Instead of having him observe that determination "stuck to her like glue" (cliché), he instead observed that determination "clung to her like a grass burr to a pant leg."

In my current work in progress, I have three POV characters: the hero, the heroine, and the heroine's father. In one scene, the heroine is racing on horseback to reach her father who is out with the cattle. We are in the father's POV, and as he notes her racing in, he makes a comparison.

Now, as I wrote this scene, the first comparison that came to mind was that she rode as if a pack of wild dogs were on her tail. This, of course, is a cliché. I searched and searched for a better simile. I came up blank. Finally, I dug deeper into who my POV character was. He is an ex-outlaw who's eluded the law for two decades. He's gone straight, but that outlaw blood still runs through his veins. 

As I pondered this character trait, the perfect comparison finally came to mind.

He twisted his neck to the side to work out a kink, and caught sight of his daughter riding down upon them as if a hangin' posse were in pursuit.

Not only does this analogy capture the POV character's personality, but it deepens the POV because that isn't something I as the author would say in narration. But it is exactly what an ex-outlaw would use as a descriptor were he relating the story.

You can practice this on your own. Take a clichéd comparison and rework it with your own character in mind. Here are some to choose from:

Light as a feather
Strong as an ox
Melted like butter
Stubborn as a mule

~~~~~ 

Short-Straw Bride released June 1, 2012.

No one steps on Archer land. Not if they value their life. But when Meredith Hayes overhears a lethal plot to burn the Archer brothers off their ranch, a twelve-year-old debt compels her to take the risk.

Fourteen years of constant vigilance hardens a man. Yet when Travis Archer confronts a female trespasser with the same vivid blue eyes as the courageous young girl he once aided, he can't bring himself to send her away. And when an act of sacrifice leaves her injured and her reputation in shreds, gratitude and guilt send him riding to her rescue once again.

Four brothers. Four straws. One bride. Despite the fact that Travis is no longer the gallant youth Meredith once dreamed about, she determines to stand by his side against the enemy that threatens them both. But will love ever be hers? Or will Travis always see her merely as a short-straw bride?

~~~~~

Two-time RITA® Finalist and winner of the coveted HOLT Medallion, CBA bestselling author, Karen Witemeyer, writes historical romance fiction for Bethany House, believing that the world needs more happily-ever-afters. She is an avid cross-stitcher, shower singer, and bakes a mean apple cobbler. Karen makes her home in Abilene, TX with her husband and three children. Learn more about Karen and her books at: www.karenwitemeyer.com.