Showing posts with label Writing Techniques. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing Techniques. Show all posts

Wednesday, July 31, 2019

The Power of Theme by Carol McClain

The time came to make the plunge and ditch New York for more hospitable climes. My husband and I would head to Tennessee.

Often my novels take a humorous twist. A friend thought it would be funny to show the huge differences between the far reaches of New York and the hills of Tennessee.

I agreed.

Then we moved here.

Aside from cornbread and a sometime indecipherable hill dialect, no differences existed. There went my novel.

Still, my friend nagged about the book as I went about my life. Nothing came to mind because my head wrapped itself around the idea of extremes.

Then one day it hit me. Preconceptions.

How often do we judge others by our biased notions?

With theme, came the book, A New York Yankee on Stinking Creek.

Theme is often underrated in inspirational books. In romances, many writers think only of the love angle, not of a deeper meaning that would draw the reader in.

Suspense writers devise tangled plots to keeping us on our seat’s edge. But what about the nuanced side of things? The flaws that drew the good guys in to solve the problem, especially if they’re not law enforcement? What ideal motivates their fight?

And sometimes, theme is overrated.

In contemporary novels, the author’s conviction is too often preached. I’ve read my share of Christian fiction where a character expounded on the salvation message in detail. She quoted long passages of familiar scripture. With most readers already Christian, the writing became too didactic or too strident. Both turn off the reader.

Or, at least, me.

A book without passion may entertain for a day, but a book motivated by conviction lives for a lifetime. Think of those books that live in your memory. 1984, Grapes of Wrath, The Great Gatsby. These are old books, sometimes too didactic, but they remain in my mind the best books I’ve ever read.

Why? Theme: the methods of totalitarianism, sacrificial love, a foolish quest for an ideal that doesn’t exist. The universal themes resonated. The reach out to me today, even decades since I’ve read the books.

When teachers of writing illustrate their points, they always pick The Wizard of Oz. Why was this so popular? There’s no place like home.

Look at your current work. What controls the story aside from plot? What drives the conflict? Dive deep. Think of your passion and let it subtly direct your writing.

Donald Maas says, “If a powerful problem is a novel’s spine, then a powerful theme is its animating spirit...It starts with having something to say” (Writing the Breakout Novel, 230).

A New York Yankee on Stinking Creek took flight once I nailed the theme it cried out to me to write.

Theme will do that to you.



In romances, many writers think only of the love angle, not of a deeper meaning that would draw the reader in. via @carol_mcclain #SeriouslyWrite #amwriting

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Author Carol McClain is an eclectic artist and author. Her interests vary as much as the Tennessee weather—running, bassoons, jazz, stained glass and, of course, writing. She’s a transplant from New York who now lives in the hills of East Tennessee with her husband and overactive Springer spaniel.

She is the president of ACFW Knoxville and the secretary of the Authors’ Guild of Tennessee.

The world in East Tennessee intrigues her from the friendly neighbors to the beautiful hiking trails and the myriad wildlife.

Life is good in here.

NOTHING GOOD COMES FROM STINKING CREEK

Alone, again, after the death of her fiancĂ©, abstract artist Kiara Rafferty finds herself on Stinking Creek, Tennessee. She wants out of this hillbilly backwater, where hicks speak an unknown language masquerading as English.  Isolated, if she doesn’t count the snakes and termites infesting her cabin, only a one-way ticket home to Manhattan would solve her problems.

Alone in a demanding crowd, Delia Mae McGuffrey lives for God, her husband, her family, and the congregation of her husband’s church. Stifled by rules, this pastor’s wife walks a fine line of perfection, trying to please them all. Now an atheist Yankee, who moved in across the road, needs her, too.

Two women. Two problems. Each holds the key to the other’s freedom.

Thursday, January 21, 2016

Story Endings and Pickle Factories by Heidi Chiavaroli

Heidi Chiavaroli
As I neared the end of my four-mile run the other morning, I was feeling good. Feeling fast. Feeling the burn. Feeling like I had not only enjoyed the run, but that I had worked hard the last three and a half miles. One last hill and then around the corner to my street.

But my satisfying run was about to be ruined. For on the corner of that last stretch is a pickle factory. And boy, were they busy making pickles that morning. Now it's not that I'm not fond of pickles. I like them well enough. The smell from a freshly opened jar doesn't even bother me. But the scent steaming from the vent of this pickle factory was an especially strong smell of a condensed kind. It hit me in the face as I puffed past. It stung my nostrils and soured my stomach.

My run was spoiled.

This is not altogether unlike the feeling you may sometimes get when nearing the end of a book. You may be enjoying the story. You sympathize with the characters. You feel invested in them. You turn each page, wondering what new development will lead them barreling toward the climax. And then...something akin to the stench of a pickle factory wafts toward your nose (or rather, your reader's mind). Something's just not...satisfying. The ending is frumpy, the characters disappointed. The book is soured, just like my stomach on the home stretch of my run the other morning.

It's funny how a bad ending can ruin an otherwise good book and a great ending can redeem a mediocre one.

As I recently wrote the end of my latest novel, I really longed for a knockout ending, but as I wrote it smelled more like mediocre. I'm still trying to figure out possible solutions, and I'm hopeful and determined to fix the problem.

Because truly, there's nothing worse than the smell of pickles at the end of a story.

Have you ever had this experience when reading a book? Have you ever been pleasantly surprised by a book's ending?


Heidi Chiavaroli is a writer, runner, wife, mother, and grace-clinger—not necessarily in that order. Ever since taking her first trip to Plimoth Plantation with her sister, mother, and grandmother at the age of nine, she has been fascinated with history and its significance to today’s people and culture. Heidi is the winner of ACFW’s 2014 Genesis Contest, Historical Category. She lives in Massachusetts with her husband, two sons, and Howie, her standard poodle. Learn more about Heidi on her website: www.heidichiavaroli.com.

Monday, January 18, 2016

Writerly Immersion by Marianne Evans

Marianne Evans
One of the things I love most about being a writer is the process of immersion.

What do I mean by that? I equate immersion to those programs that allow people to do a deep and thorough dive into, say, a foreign language, or a foreign culture. It’s about the process of learning by being ‘dropped’ into a specific time or place. It’s about direct knowledge. Internet research fine-tunes and answers a bevy of questions; immersion is somewhat different. It’s more direct, and tactile. I embrace the story I create by experiencing the places and things that touch the lives of my characters. 

For example, when I wrote my books Devotion and Forgiveness (which releases later this year) my husband and I took a number of road trips to Nashville, Tennessee. I didn’t just record restaurant names and hot-spot locales, I literally walked the path of my heroes and heroines. I ate at the restaurants I mention in the books, studied the countryside, its textures and colors and scents, all of which, I hope, lends authenticity to the words I write.

For Christmas at Tiffany’s I called upon a magical Christmas voyage I took to New York City with my daughter years ago.  We stayed at a hotel in Midtown. We prowled the streets. We even found ourselves wrapped in the fat, tumbling flakes of a snow storm. From there, I described bedecked store windows, the sparkling tree at Rockefeller Center, the hustle and bustle of city life—all of which were captured through the lens of personal experience. For my London Christmas stories, I returned to the cobbled streets and historic venues of that vibrant, timeless city. I visited London as freshly graduated high school senior and twice more once I was married. My love for both locations became the heartbeat of each novel.

My latest immersion is into my sister-in-law's farm in Indiana. I've visited them thousands of times, of course. They're family. However, setting a story there helped me experience their life's work through fresh eyes. As some of you know, I'm in the process of writing The Fishermen of Antioch series for Pelican Book Group. This trio of novels will center on a family-owned soybean farm. John and Mary own and operate a soybean farm and during a recent visit, I not only called upon their vast knowledge of the planting and harvesting process, I could also walk the fields, photograph the crops, peel open a pod and pop a few crisp, meaty beans into my mouth. I hope that kind of realism translates into the circumstances my characters face, their lives and settings.

Do you write what you know? If not, no worries – I recently completed and submitted a story set on a fictional, Mediterranean island. Trust me, there’s been no real-life visit—only the wistful call of my heart. Immersion is one of a hundred ways to write an engaging story, yet as I revisit my WIP and crank toward deadline, I wanted to share this idea/perspective and pose the question: Do you write what you know? What research methods do you like best? What techniques help you ‘keep it real’? I can’t wait to hear, and learn from you!

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Christmas at Tiffany's
All she wants for Christmas is her Master’s Degree. All he wants is a one-way plane ticket back to Los Angeles. 

Tiffany Zelling’s mission is to become a crisis therapy counselor using specially trained animals as comfort tools. She's focused on reaching the end of her school career, and nothing will stand in her way—not even a fantasy-world attraction to colleague Mitch Alexander. 

After a year as interim Director of East Coast Operations Mitch's tenure has been a resounding success. Now, he’s set to return to California and lay claim to a well-deserved promotion. He can’t wait to leave behind the cold and snowy darkness of Manhattan, but when corporate bullying and a massive snowfall throws him together with Tiffany Zelling, Mitch wonders if heading west is his best future. 

As two hearts build a pathway to love, goals shift and evolve. But as Christmas joy and hope move through the streets of New York, critical decisions must be made. Can their lives truly meld? Can Christmas at Tiffany’s be God’s answer…for them both?

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Marianne Evans is an award-winning author of Christian romance and fiction. Her hope is to spread the faith-affirming message of God’s love through the stories He prompts her to create. Devotion, earned the Bookseller’s Best Award as well as the Heart of Excellence Award. Hearts Communion earned a win for Best Romance from the Christian Small Publisher's Association. Finding Home won the Selah award for Best Novella. Marianne is a lifelong resident of Michigan and an active member of Romance Writers of America, most notably the Greater Detroit Chapter where she served two terms as President.