Thursday, December 6, 2012

Fond Memories by Erica Vetsch


I am of the opinion that fiction writers are born. We just don’t all realize we’re writers at the same age/time. But if you polled writers, I bet you’d find that from an early age, we spun stories in our heads, we lived vividly through the characters in books, and that we spent more time in a fantasy world than in the real world.

Some of my fondest memories as a child revolve around books. When I was young, I lived an intense inner life populated by the characters I had come to love in Marguerite Henry books, L.M. Montgomery books, John Richard Young books, and so many more. I pioneered with Laura Ingalls Wilder, rode race horses with Alec Ramsey, and solved mysteries with Encyclopedia Brown.

I not only lived those stories with the characters, my imagination picked up where the book left off, and I created stories with those characters, taking us all to new adventures. I was always reading a book, whether in school when I should’ve been doing schoolwork or with a flashlight under the covers at night. 

It was that time spent in another world that made me feel happy. I needed that escape, and I still do, though now it isn’t only reading about made up people, it’s making them up myself that is so refreshing and exciting.

When I was explaining this to my teenage son, about how I needed to spend time in my own head to feel like things were going okay, he nodded in complete agreement and said, “Me too, but a book will get me there faster.”

He gets it. He might even turn out to be a writer himself someday.

                                                    


About the Author:
Erica Vetsch is a transplanted Kansan now residing in Minnesota. She loves history and reading, and is blessed to be able to combine the two by writing historical fiction set in the American West. Whenever she’s not following flights of fancy in her fictional world, she’s the company bookkeeper for the family lumber business, mother of two terrific teens, wife to a man who is her total opposite and soul-mate, and avid museum patron.

A Bride Sews With Love in Needles, CA
A Harvey Girl waits on True Love.
With her brother already on the front lines in France, Meghan Thorson becomes a Harvey Girl in Needles, California. Ready and willing to wait on the hundreds of doughboys heading for Europe, Meghan deems this service her way of contributing to the war effort. When a Red Cross  representative breezes through town, Meghan embraces the challenge to do even more, committing to completing a Red Cross signature quilt and canvassing the town for donations to the cause.

Horseman Caleb McBride makes his living by training stock for the US Cavalry and keeps his pride by remaining a loner. When Meghan meets Caleb, she senses something mysterious and wounded about him, piquing her curiosity. But after the townsfolk scorn him as a coward and a profiteer, Caleb feels her pity and becomes even more guarded.

When Needles is hit by an influenza epidemic and the Harvey hotel is made into a temporary hospital, Meghan discovers Caleb’s shameful secret. Will both Caleb and Meghan find a way to kill their pride before their chance of love rips them apart at the seams?

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Ask O: Must I Slash Weak Verbs?

 

Happy Wednesday my writing friends!

Recently I've encountered some shady characters--you've met them too--weak verbs. Like last week's culprit, to-be verbs, writing coaches everywhere warn against these hazards. Let's refresh our memories about why we must shun them.

First, what do I mean by weak verbs? Really, any overused verb becomes weak. Even lovely verbs like ooze or shimmer loose their oomph when used too often (more than once in a book). But some of the traditional weak verbs are: look, walk, turn, go, come, get, etc. Can you think of others?

Foggy

Guinevere went to the horse and got on.

Aside from the overwhelming bluckiness of this sentence, it’s also vague. The weak verbs keep readers at arms length, because they're not “in on” the details of the scene. I strive to pull readers from the bleachers, yanking them into the story. How awesome when a reader says, “I felt like I was that character.”Ambiguity acts like a curtain, keeping readers out. Clarity invites them in, and strong verbs help zero in on the details.

Guinevere dashed to the horse and leapt on.

Isn’t that cool? Even just exchanging those two verbs created a clearer picture, and helped pull readers into the scene.

Lazy


Okay people, true confessions. Weak verbs are like the TV clicker. They hang around within easy reach. When I spot weak verbs as I’m writing, it takes time to stop and think of something zippier. Also, searching for strong verbs can bog down the self-editing process. Isn’t it good enough? I bemoan. Do I really have to change all these looks, turns, and wents?

Well, yes, I do. If I want my writing to pop, to jump from the page and grab readers, I can’t let those weak verbs survive.

Common


When I edited, I'd encounter maybe one out of fifty authors who used strong verbs. What a relief when a manuscript brimmed with awesome action words. Their commitment to excellence showed.

Truth is most writers struggle with weak verbs. If we want our manuscripts to shine among the many that editors and agents receive, strong verbs are vital! It only takes a couple paragraphs to know whether a writer has put in the time and effort to forge powerful sentences.

A Few Tips


The easiest way I’ve found to annihilate weak verbs is simply to use Word’s search and find function. You know, good ol’ Control F. I look for each of the weak verbs I listed above, then spruce up any I can. It takes time, but it’s worth it.

I also treasure my Super Thesaurus. A writer’s best friend. And I’ve created a list of awesome verbs I find when reading. When I’m stuck, these spark my imagination.

Have fun expunging those weak verbs, and let me know if you think of any other verbs to avoid or have any tips to help. I’d love to hear. And don't forget to send me your writing questions either in the comments or at o@ocieanna.com.

God bless and happy writing,

Ocieanna


Tuesday, December 4, 2012

To Write Issue Driven Books..or Not… by Margaret Daley

When I came up with the theme for Saving Hope, my first book in the Men of the Texas Rangers Series, I was determined to write about human trafficking (and child prostitution that comes from that problem). I got caught up in the research and issue of human trafficking. It ignited my passion to do something about it. I wanted to write a story that would highlight the issue and how extensive it was in the United States.

After writing Saving Hope, I had a loose framework for my second book in the series--Shattered Silence--about a serial killer targeting illegal aliens along the Texas border with Mexico. But something was missing for me in the story. I needed an added passion for the story. I needed an issue that I was passionate about. As a teacher I had always been concerned with bullying in the schools. I took it a step further in my book and showed it also in other situations--workplace and a marriage. Bullying became my theme as human trafficking had in the first book.

My third book--Scorned Justice--was about revenge and the lengths people went to for revenge. This isn't a social issue like my other books in the series, but it is a unifying theme to help me build my story upon. A lot of things are done for revenge and the subject intrigued me.

Severed Trust, my fourth book, came about when I heard of a friend who was addicted to prescription drugs. It started with a painful affliction that he couldn't control without heavy-duty pain medication. It helped with the pain, but it left him addicted to painkillers. As I've been digging deeper into the issue of prescription drug abuse, I'm shocked at how prevalent it is in the United States. One police officer that works at the state level said about half his cases are connected with prescription drug abuse. Teens are involved as well as adults. Certain prescription drugs can be as additive as illegal drugs like heroin or cocaine. My passion was sparked yet again.

When I can connect with that passionate side of me, I get excited about the story. That's why issue driven books can be so important to a writer. But a writer can be just as passionate about a character, a locale or a career. What's important for a writer is to tap into that passionate subject whether an issue or one of the other aspects of a story. That passion is conveyed to the reader, adding a spark to the story.


Margaret Daley, an award-winning author of eighty-three books, has been married for over forty years and is a firm believer in romance and love. When she isn’t traveling, she’s writing love stories, often with a suspense thread and corralling her three cats that think they rule her household. To find out more about Margaret visit her website at http://www.margaretdaley.com.

Shattered Silence - released October 2012
A serial killer is targeting illegal aliens in southern Texas. Texas Ranger Cody Jackson is paired with a local police officer, Liliana Rodriguez, to investigate the murders. 



While the case brings Cody and Liliana ever closer, the tension between Americans and Mexican Americans heightens. As Cody and Liliana race to discover who is behind the murders and bring peace to the area, what they uncover isn’t what they expected. Will Cody and Liliana’s faith and love be strong enough to survive the storm of violence?

Christmas Stalking - released November 2012
Bodyguard Ellie St. James has one objective: protect her client…without letting her know. Pretending to be Rachel "Winnie" Winfield's assistant lets Ellie stay close, but there's an unexpected complication—Colt Winfield. Winnie's grandson wasn't in on the plans, and the suspicious marine biologist isn't easy to fool. When the truth comes out, so do more threats to Winnie's life. Trapped on a Colorado mountain, Ellie and Colt must trust each other to guard Winnie and find the stalker. Before this Christmas becomes their last.

Monday, December 3, 2012

Christmas Series 2012: The Christmas Stalking by Lillian Duncan

Lillian Duncan
Hi everyone! We hope you're enjoying reading about some of the great Christian fiction coming out this Christmas. Maybe you've written a seasonal novel or maybe you just love reading them. Either way, we hope you're inspired. Today, Lillian Duncan is here to discuss some behind-the-scenes secrets about her newest release, The Christmas Stalking. Enjoy! ~ Annette

Welcome, Lillian. Tell us what makes your Christmas novel different than others you’ve seen or read?

The fact that it’s a suspense novel makes it different. Most Christmas stories are sugar and spice and everything nice, but The Christmas Stalking is an action-filled suspense story but still has a Christmas message.

How did the story come about?

I sat down at my computer and thought—CHRISTMAS... CHRISTMAS... CHRISTMAS—and it went from there.
The Christmas Stalking

What time of year did you write it and how did you motivate yourself to write a Christmas novel at that time of year?

I wrote it in May—the opposite season of Christmas. I did listen to some Christmas music to get me in the right frame of mind.

What’s next for you in writing? (Will you do more Christmas stories?)

I had a lot of fun writing this, so, yes, I hope to write more Christmas stories. Right now, I’m working on final edits for Betrayed, the second in my Sisters By Choice series by Harbourlight books. It will be out sometime next year.

Thanks for visiting, Lillian!

The Christmas Stalking releases this month from Harbourlight Books.

Country music superstar Destiny has it all—beauty, money, fame—and a crazed stalker.

Overzealous fan or crazed stalker? Country music superstar Destiny appears to have it all. Beauty, money, and fame. But it’s not all glitz and glamor, being a celebrity comes with a price—loneliness and now threats from an unknown stalker.

With Christmas approaching and as the danger escalates in Nashville, Destiny has no choice but to disappear. She escapes to her grandparents’ cabin in the Adirondack Mountains near the tiny Village of Serenity & Peace.

It seems to be the perfect choice for a hideout. Longing for the serenity and peace she experienced there as a child, Destiny resumes her long-forgotten identity as Holly Stone.

Unfortunately, her fame follows her to the tiny village—along with her stalker.


To learn more about Lillian and her books, visit her:

Facebook: www.facebook.com/lillian.k.duncan
Twitter: @lillianduncan
Website: www.lillianduncan.net 

  (e-book format; $0.99 download during December)