Showing posts with label Keely Brooke Keith. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Keely Brooke Keith. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 7, 2018

My Favorite Places to People Watch by Keely Brooke Keith

One of a writer’s best tools is the art of people watching. Here are some of my favorite places to people watch:

Airports
Songwriter John Mayer nailed this one in his song Wheel: “Airports see it all the time where someone’s last goodbye blends in with someone’s sigh cause someone’s coming home.” Airports are a parade of human experience. It’s in the pastor praying over departing missionaries, the businesswoman stomping toward her gate and the rhythm of her suitcase wheels rolling behind her on the tile floor, and the soldier’s welcome home kiss with his wife who is holding their newborn.

Malls
Not quite as dramatic in emotional depth, but bubbling with frustration, chaos, and teen angst, a shopping mall is a like a catalog of human features. The faces range from the overwhelmed mommy who brought the double stroller but neither of her toddlers will stay in it, to the Botoxed suburbanite dashing from Macy’s to Banana Republic, to the senior citizens in arch-supporting sneakers power walking their daily laps.

Churches
A tour of several church denominations is necessary for the full scope of church people watching. Every church has its own culture and feel, but I’ve noticed some commonalities in the sanctuary pre-service. Watch the pastor’s wife, flustered as she wrangles her four children into the second pew from the front, suddenly straighten her posture and broaden her smile when the congregants start to arrive. Watch the early birds who sit in their routine seats, sigh with contentment, and absorb the peace. Watch the middle-aged man who slips into the room halfway through the service, perches on the edge of the back pew, and drops his face into his hands.

If you’re a writer, go people watching for inspiration. If you’re a reader, download my new book Uncharted Journey, and see if you enjoy how my hobby of people watching enlivens my writing.


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Born in St. Joseph, Missouri, Keely Brooke Keith was a tree-climbing, baseball-loving 80s kid. She grew up in a family who moved often, which fueled her dreams of faraway lands. When she isn’t writing, Keely enjoys teaching home school lessons and playing bass guitar. Keely, her husband, and their daughter live on a hilltop south of Nashville, Tennessee.

Uncharted Journey
Young widow Eva Vestal assumes loneliness is God’s permanent plan for her life. She keeps busy by raising her son and co-managing the Inn at Falls Creek with her elderly father, but her heart yearns for more.

Solomon “Solo” Cotter has spent his life working with horses, but he secretly wants to write a book of the children’s stories his grandfather told him as a boy. He barters with Eva’s father for a 40-night stay at the inn, a needed respite from work to get his stories on paper.

Once Eva discovers the barter, she believes Solo is taking advantage of her father’s failing memory. But when tragedy strikes and Solo works hard to save the inn, Eva sees his true nature. As her heart stirs with feelings for Solo, she wrestles with the guilt of loving someone new.

Meanwhile, outside the Land...

Bailey Colburn arrives at the coordinates of the Land on the autumn equinox and finds nothing but ocean. The sun sets, ending Bailey’s dream of a safe and simple life with the family she’s never known. Just when she decides Justin Mercer lied about visiting a hidden land in the South Atlantic Ocean and meeting Bailey’s distant relatives, the atmosphere around the boat changes and ushers her into an uncharted world, but her entrance into the Land comes at a devastating price.

Book Links:
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Uncharted Journey is available on Amazon.
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Wednesday, October 5, 2016

The 30k-Word Wall and How to Break Through By Keely Brooke Keith



Whether you're a pantser, plotter, or plantser, Keely Brooke Keith has some tips for keeping your story from stalling thousands of words in. -- Sandy

Keely: I’m a mix of plotter and pantser. I like to have a basic outline of where the story is going, but I live for that first draft rush of watching the story come alive on the page. I’m currently writing my 8th novel. A few novels back, I noticed I’d hit a wall in my writing at about the 30,000-word mark every time.

At some point (book 4 maybe?) I decided to find out why this was happening. It took work, but I uncovered what was missing in my preparation. Armed with a little planning—but not so much that I suck the possibilities out of it—I set out on my next novel adventure, and sailed right through.

Here’s the handy checklist I complied to keep both my passion for the story burning and my focus on the story’s theme:

  • Character’s name:
  • Personality type:
  • Hidden problem from past wound (inner journey):
  • Lie he/she believes:
  • Greatest fear:
  • Secret desire (opposite of fear):
  • Greatest strength (something admirable shown in first scene):
  • Flaw (shown through attitude):
  • Quirk (a symbol of the flaw):
  • What does he/she value most:
  • His/her status quo (opening image):
  • Question posed to him/her (theme of book):
  • Inciting incident that puts what he/she most values at stake:
  • Antagonistic force:
  • Love story carrying the theme:
  • Outer journey (definable goal):
  • Obstacles:
  • False peak or reversal upping stakes:
  • Bleakest moment:
  • Calvary/new info:
  • Lesson learned (inner journey):
  • Decision to act/prepare for biggest test (using new courage):
  • The true test:
  • Solution to outer journey:
  • Proof of change (opposite of opening image):

This list isn’t meant to be formulaic, but a simple exercise where I write a couple of words about each area of the story. It helps me see what I’m missing, or what I’ve done too much of. Running through this checklist at the mid-point of my first draft gives my spontaneous side plenty of ideas for twists, and helps remind me of what I want the story to accomplish.

How about you? Do you hit a wall at a certain point in your first drafts? What would you add to this list?


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Keely Brooke Keith is the author of the Uncharted series (Edenbrooke Press) and Aboard Providence (CrossRiver Media). Her novels are known for blending genres in unconventional ways. When she isn’t writing stories, Keely enjoys playing bass guitar, preparing homeschool lessons, and collecting antique textbooks. Keely resides with her husband and their daughter on a hilltop south of Nashville where she dreams up stories, hoping to encourage, comfort, and inspire readers. She is a member of ACFW.