That Nasty Five-Letter Word—Pride

Thursdays – Dawn’s Devotions for Writers

“A man's pride brings him low, but a man of
lowly spirit gains honor.” (Proverbs 29:23 NIV)

Pride. It’s a nasty five-letter word.

I’m not referring to healthy pride—the kind that motivates a person to do a good job while performing a task. I’m talking about the kind that causes people’s unwillingness to admit to being wrong—the kind that builds walls between people, and between people and God. It’s destructive.

I think most of us like to be right. And we rather be praised than told to do something better—or even over. After all, we’re human. Our pride can make us feel defensive. It can even make us feel bad about ourselves. “I should have done better.”

I was raised to be a perfectionist. Nothing less than my best has ever been acceptable. As I’ve gotten older, I’ve strived to not be so hard on myself, but it’s not always easy to put pride in its proper place.

Recently, I was tested on my willingness to set aside my pride. I had to make the choice of admitting to a client that I had made several errors while editing his work, or keeping quiet. The errors were small—nothing he’d catch—but in good conscious, I couldn’t let it go. I contacted him, explained, and apologized.

Since then, he’s come to me for additional advice pertaining to his work and publishing, and again I’ve had to swallow my pride in several areas. But my honesty has resulted in blessings. He no longer thinks of me as a service provider, but as a friend and sister in the Lord. I cannot tell you how much that means to me. I’m overwhelmed by his trust.

Does pride ever get in your way?

There are writers who leave critique groups because they aren’t willing to receive constructive feedback. They only want to hear praise about their story and writing. The cost? They stop growing in knowledge and skills in the craft.

There are writers who refuse to listen to the advice of respected editors and agents. Their manuscripts don’t sell because they won’t make necessary changes. Pride gets in the way because they believe they know best.

There will always be authors who write better, write more, and have a larger fan base. If a friend or critique buddy progresses further or faster in a writing career than you, will you let pride stand in the way of your relationship? Will you become resentful of that writer’s success?

“He has brought down rulers from their thrones but has lifted up the humble” (Luke 1:52 NIV). Lay down destructive pride, and let our Lord lift up and bless you.

Grammar-O

Grammar-O Wednesdays
with Ocieanna

Welcome to grammar day on Seriously Write. If you’re a regular visitor here, you know that Ocieanna, our good friend and fellow blog hostess, went into cardiac arrest early in January. She’s doing well, but needs further rest. In the meantime, Annette and I (Dawn) will carry on in Ocieanna’s place until she can return. Please continue praying for her. Thanks!

Ready to test your skills?

The following sentences may contain grammar, punctuation, spelling, or other writing misdemeanors. Your job is to find the infraction and set it right. Try not to look at the answers below.

Have fun!

Sentences to correct:

1) After a day of pouring rain (or falling snow) and cool temperatures; there’s nothing better than a crackeling warm fire to make you feel comfortable and safe.

2) But it doesn’t last forever. The needs tending, or eventually what’s burning will be used up. The embers will die. The air, warm and inviting, will grow at first chilly, and then cold.

3) The same is true of our Spiritual lives. When we get our first taste of what its like to be in relationship with our Lord—not just know about Him from Sunday School lessons—but really know Him, we hunger for more.

4) Passion for our faith, for living what we believe, and serving God initally takes priority over everything else. But if we don’t stook our inner spiritual fire for God, the flames will slowly die down. We’ll become passive about not only sharing our beliefs – but also passive about what we believe. But, it doesn’t have to be that way . . .

5) People who are in a strong relationship with Christ imanate a warmth and glow to people around them. Their inner spiritual fires are stoked.

6) 1 Thessalonians 5;19 says, “Do not put out the Spirit's fire (NIV). I want to keep the fire stoked in my relationship with Lord. Do you?



Corrected sentences:

1) After a day of pouring rain (or falling snow) and cool temperatures, there’s nothing better than a crackling, warm fire to make you feel comfortable and safe.

Note: There should be commas after the word “temperatures” and “crackling.”

2) But it doesn’t last forever. The fire needs tending, or eventually what’s burning will be used up. The embers will die. The air, warm and inviting, will first grow chilly, and then cold.

3) The same is true of our spiritual lives. When we get our first taste of what it’s like to be in relationship with our Lord—not just know about him from Sunday school lessons—but really know him, we hunger for more.

Note: The CMOS and the CWMS both state that deity pronouns should not be capitalized. And most publishers agree. There is a long list of reasons why. But, if an author feels strongly about capitalizing He, Him, etc. when referring to God, the publisher will usually accept it. If you choose to capitalize the pronouns, it’s important to be consistent throughout the manuscript.


4) Passion for our faith, for living what we believe, and serving God initially takes priority over everything else. But if we don’t stoke our inner spiritual fire for God, the flames will slowly die down. We’ll become passive about not only sharing our beliefs—but also passive about what we believe. But, it doesn’t have to be that way. . . .

Note: A four-dot ellipsis (which is simply a period followed by a three-dot ellipsis) indicates an omission that does not render the sentence grammatically incomplete.

5) People who are in a strong relationship with Christ emanate a warmth and glow to people around them. Their inner, spiritual fires are stoked.

Note: A comma is needed after the word “inner.” To not include the comma would mean that we were comparing inner to outer spiritual fires. Including the comma means that we’re referring to inner fires, which happen to be spiritual.

6) First Thessalonians 5:19 says, “Do not put out the Spirit's fire” (NIV). I want to keep the fire stoked in my relationship with the Lord. Do you?

Note: Write out the number if the sentence begins with the number.
Note: Use a colon instead of a semi-colon between chapter and verse.
Note: Quotation marks are needed after the word “fire.”

How well did you do?

I use The Chicago Manual of Style and Webster’s Dictionary as my sources.

Giving Back Series, Part Five: Writing Freebie Articles

Writing Freebie Articles
Giving Back Series

Net's Notations Tuesdays

Here’s a fun topic for our Giving Back series: writing articles for blogs, (like Seriously Write *wink*) for "free." Our guests have been so gracious over the past couple of years, offering their wisdom and insight, their encouragement and personal stories, all without monetary compensation. Thank you!

(If you haven’t written for us and would like to, please let Dawn or me know. We’re always scheduling new guests.)

Okay, now back from our commercial…

I remember the first time one of my articles was accepted for publication. What a day! And then came the moment I learned I’d get paid for something I wrote. Whew, we’re a professional now. *grin* But what about the markets you won’t get paid to submit to? Are they worth your time? Probably. Here’s why:

1) PROMOTION: Your name and book(s)/work are promoted. (This is a big benefit of writing for Seriously Write. Lots of our guests time their posts around new releases.)
2) PROMOTION: You get to work with varied markets. (Hey, that’s about promotion too.)
3) EXPERIENCE: You gain experience and another bullet point on your byline/resume.
4) ESTABLISH: Even if you aren’t published in book length, you establish a name for yourself while you work toward publication. Article/devotional submission is a fantastic way to get started in the industry. (Carla Williams, then president of NCWA taught me that. Still so thankful for her wisdom.)

So, even in our efforts to give back to writers by sharing our hard-earned wisdom or experience, we receive benefits. It’s a win-win.

You won’t always be able to see the results, but whenever you give back, God marks His tally sheet. You’re planting a seed; you’re helping other writers; you’re making a difference. Hear this: no investment in your writing life is wasted.

So, share your expertise and trust God with the dividends. He’s watching your account as you give back.

Writing for a Grandmother's Heart by Janet Chester Bly

We've come to the final installment of Janet Chester Bly's great series on Writing For A Woman's Heart. Today's focus is writing for a grandmother's heart. Don't miss her tips on article topics. Read on!

Writing For a Grandmother's Heart*
by Janet Chester Bly

They don’t make grandmas like they used to. No more black orthopedic shoes. No Kleenex® tucked under her sleeve. No hats and gloves, fried chicken and dumplings every Sunday. And few grandmas provide homemade cookies fresh out of the oven or jam from berries picked out of her backyard.

Today’s grandmothers tend to wear sweatbands and tennies, hike the malls or run the levies, a cell phone to her ear. She nukes popcorn in the microwave and fills her cookie jar with store-bought ginger thins and Almond Roca®.

Grandkids are different too. They live in a jazzed out, juiced-up, high tech world.

The Power of a Godly Nana

Paul said Timothy had a sincere, rich faith that lived first in his grandma, Lois, then caught fire in his mom, Eunice, then in himself (2 Timothy 1:5).

Kids need grandparents as much as ever. Grandmas awaken grandkids sense of a full-flung family. They fill in the blanks of family history. They pass on tidbits of how to cope with life. Grandmas explain the world from a vantage point that no one else can.

Writers can help grandma enjoy and maintain her critical, venerable role in the midst of a stormy sea of unsettling social changes.

Who Is Your Grandma Reader?

Grandmas come in all ages. My mother was 34. She still raised four children at home. She was a hands-off grandma. My sister-in-law was 63 and a retired elementary school principal. She’s a very up close and personal, involved grandma.
Who is your reader?
She may be a step-grandparent.
She may be a foster grandparent.
She may be the mother of a son who fears losing the grandkids if daughter-in-law turns away.
She may be raising the grandkids herself.
She may be a grandma dating again, after death of a spouse or divorce.

Your articles or book ideas should be focused to her specific life situation, such as. . .
*the pros and cons of re-marriage for her, her children, the grandchildren.
*finding her inner this-season-of-life self
*forgiving herself if her kids aren’t terrific adults
*financial plans to last to retirement & beyond
*now that the kids are grown and gone, “What’s next?”
*mixing care of her own mother with full-time job
*protecting her health—the physical challenges
*learning the lingo—catching up on today’s language
*how she can still be useful, an active part of society with her own creativity.
*computer skills for dummy grammies

Some article topics that have been done and will always be needed:
*Fun, Food, and Fashions For Old Fogies
*Very Merry Un-birthday Celebrations
*Easy Does It Aerobics
*Finding Balance and Flexibility or How To Get Up in the Morning
*Brain Aerobics—ways to boost her memory
*How to Take 10 Years off Your Face in Ten Minutes
*How To Avoid ID theft

Find your own slant. Fill in with true anecdotes and stories from your world. Flavor with your style.

If you’re writing for grandmas, you got to know her needs, understand her heart.

~~~~~

Janet Chester Bly has authored 12 books & co-authored 18 others with her husband, Stephen Bly, including The Power of a Godly Grandparent, available at www.Amazon.com or http://BlyBooks.com/store.htm. Check out her blog: http://BlyBooks.blogspot.com

* copyright 2006, 2011

Too Sick and Tired NOT to Write by Mesu Andrews

Welcome to Fortifying Friday at Seriously Write. Guest author Mesu Andrews is here today to share her journey to publication. Her path is a great example of God having his own plan for our writing careers. I (Dawn) was blessed by her story, and I have a feeling you will be too.

Too Sick and Tired

NOT to Write
by Mesu Andrews

In 1996, I was a busy pastor’s wife with two active little girls and a growing speaking ministry. I didn’t have time to be sick. When an annoying flu bug was diagnosed as fibromyalgia eighteen months later, our family adjusted to Mommy’s new normal.

A slower pace provided me more quiet time with Jesus, and I was intrigued by the Song of Solomon. Reading all eight chapters every day for a year, an incredible story unfolded, and it became my most popular retreat topic. Just one problem. My audiences wanted it in written form.

I bought a “how-to” book and wrote my first proposal. I purchased airfare to Baltimore and attended a writers’ conference. All three critique appointments, two editors and an agent, begged me to stick with speaking. I was crushed. Returning home, I filed the Song of Solomon proposal under “F” for Failure and kept writing devotionals.

My health plummeted in 2002, and I spent six months in bed. The “people ministries” that once filled my days—Bible studies and weekends retreats—were now infrequent. God’s Word was burning inside me, and my laptop became the release valve. During these months, I wrote Solomon’s Song, my first full work of fiction.

By November of 2003, Mayo Clinic added two more chronic conditions to my already weary body, and I prayed, “Lord, will I ever teach Your Word again?” I meant teach as in: “speaking in front of a group” because my writing still felt awkward and ineffective. I just didn’t communicate as well through my keyboard as I once did in person.

In 2005, daily migraines began, but each week I let the Lord whisper through His Word, and He often provided a life-lesson that I included in my growing devotional ministry. Positive feedback poured in, and people seemed to prefer the stories over my carefully researched Bible facts…go figure!

I bought another “how-to” book, wrote a non-fiction devotional proposal and flew to California in hopes of securing an agent. The Lord was gracious and answered my prayer. For three years, this fabulous, committed agent knocked on every publisher’s door. The answer was still No.

My heart grew content with ministry through e-devotionals, but my wise and tenacious friend challenged me saying, “You’re a fiction writer. Resurrect your Solomon novel.”

“I’m not a novelist!” I protested. “I’m a Bible teacher. I write Bible studies and devotionals.”

She stopped all my protest with a single reply. “Didn’t Jesus use parables to teach? I think it was the Pharisees that recited Scriptures.”

Only our dearest friends will push that hard for our own good.

At that moment, I became a student of fiction. Now, my novels and devotionals teach through story. The Song of Solomon proposal eventually secured my first contract with Revell, but it’s the second book to release (Working Title, Love’s Sacred Song, March 2012, Revell). My debut novel, Love Amid the Ashes (March 2011, Revell), chronicles Job’s troubles and triumphs.




Mesu's greatest delight is to share God's truth through well-researched, compelling stories of real men and women who lived in biblical times. As an author and speaker, she illuminates the sometimes shadowy characters of Scripture, helping audiences and readers experience God's Word in living color.

To find out more about Mesu and her books, please visit: http://www.mesuandrews.com/

Harboring Any Idols?

Thursdays – Dawn’s Devotions for Writers

“You shall not make for yourself an idol in the

form of anything in heaven above or on the earth

beneath or in the waters below.” (Exodus 20:4 NIV)

I love it when I come across a new way of looking at Scripture. Those “ah-ha” moments are rare, but I recently experienced one while editing a client’s manuscript. My eyes were opened to looking at idol worship in a different way than I had before.

It’s pretty easy to see that if our drive and passion in life is to increase the amount in our bank accounts—look like a runway model, despite what it costs our health—become successful, regardless of who we hurt while on the journey—that we’ve replaced what’s important with money, good looks, and fame.

But do we harbor other idols in our hearts? Anything we choose to serve above God might be considered an idol.

In Exodus 32, we read that although God freed the children of Israel, performed miracles in front of them, and provided for their needs, they grew impatient with God. They were tired of wandering and waiting. They wanted the Promised Land NOW.

Out of their need for control, they used their hands to build a golden calf to worship—something they could see and touch.

When we take things into our own hands instead of trusting God to move on our behalf, we’re like the children of Israel. We react out of needing to feel in control. We want to see results—and we want to see them NOW.

Of course that doesn’t mean we shouldn’t work to provide for our families. But instead of worshipping the pay check, we’re to trust that God will provide for us—which includes the means for us to receive the funds we need without doing something unethical or illegal.

As writers, we’re to work hard at our craft. There’s no way to get a contract without putting forth effort and submitting to agents and publishers. We’re required to network and find ways to market our writing projects. But wanting a contract or attention so desperately that we put it above our relationship with God could be considered idol worship. Not trusting in God’s timing and his ways, but only in our hard work and skill—and desiring control—could be considered idol worship.

I know … There are days when it’s not easy to let go. I frequently struggle with wanting control. But it’s not my call as to when certain doors open for me. It’s God’s.

Are you worrying about the stack of bills on the counter? An illness? Your children? A broken relationship? Are you hoping to find an agent, hear back on a submission, receive direction on a story, or find the means to attend a writers conference?

God delivered the children of Israel to the Promised Land. He’ll take care of us too. Let’s try to rid ourselves of any idols hidden in our hearts.

Remember—just because we don’t see things happening as quickly as we’d like, it doesn’t mean that God isn’t working on it.

Semicolons

It’s Grammar-O Wednesday, dear readers. As you probably know, Ocieanna is recovering from a cardiac arrest in early January. Please continue to pray for her. She is doing better. While her health improves, Dawn and I are taking turns covering grammar.

Today let’s talk about semicolons. This is sometimes challenging for writers, so let’s dive in and then test ourselves.

First, when to use them. There are two main times to use semicolons.

1. For items in a series which also include commas.
2. To separate two independent and related clauses. (Note: use before adverbs between independent clauses)

Let me give you some examples.

Series examples:

Matthew 6:30, 33; 12:18; Mark 2:2, 19

She called her mother, whom she hadn’t spoken with in two whole days; her brother; and her best friend.

Two independent but related clauses example:

He couldn’t give up now; victory had to be right in front of him.

Notice in this example, the two clauses could be separate sentences with periods and still be correct. The key is they have to be independent or complete clauses (subject and verb) not just phrases (fragments).

Got it? Now, let’s test ourselves.

Where should we place semicolons in the following sentences:

Cora grabbed her sunglasses, the ones with the scratch, her beach bag, her purse, and her car keys.

Could you look up Matthew 6:30, 33, Psalm 42:11, and John 14:27?

Trey needed to get his head on straight. Maddie was counting on him.

As her father, he needed to at least act like he had his act together, indeed he’d better pray and ask for a fresh download of wisdom.

If I had to choose, I’d pick the black one, the red one, or the green one.

Answers. Now, here come those semicolons:

Cora grabbed her sunglasses, the ones with the scratch; her beach bag; her purse; and her car keys. (Note: you could also write tight here and avoid the semicolon all together: Cora grabbed her scratched sunglasses, her beach bag, her purse, and her keys.)

Could you look up Matthew 6:30, 33; Psalm 42:11; and John 14:27?

Trey needed to get his head on straight; Maddie was counting on him.

As her father, he needed to at least act like he had his act together; indeed he’d better pray and ask for a fresh download of wisdom.

If I had to choose, I’d pick the black one; the red one; and the green one.

Note: I used CMOS as my reference material for this post.

Giving Back Series, Part Four: Critiquing

Critiquing

Giving Back Series
Net's Notations Tuesdays

We sit around in a circle, the smell of French fries and burgers swirling in the air, chatter and shared fellowship between us. Welcome to McCrit. Four of us make up the group, three of whom are your hostesses here on Seriously Write. We pass each other chapters, then get to work, reading, pencils at the ready. We try not to peek at each other’s comments or smiley faces. It’s best to wait until we’re through with the reading portion, when we begin to share our impressions. Let the fun begin!

We’re there to share our lives, our writing, and our opinions with each other.

We’re there to give back.

The greatest thing about a crit group you get to share your opinion as a mostly objective reader. You bring a new (and informed) perspective. And your opinion matters. A lot. It’s likely you’re in a group with others who are near your experience level, but either way, your input counts.

If it hasn’t happened already, someday a writer may come to you for your opinion on his/her work. Say this person hasn’t been writing as long as you have been, or this is someone you’re mentoring, or this is a friend whose usual group isn’t meeting this week. So there you are. Limited time, with a choice to make.

We’ve been talking about giving back this month. Critiquing is another way we can give back (and usually get something immediately in return). When you take the time to read someone else’s work, with a mind for improving it and helping that person, you’re offering a service. You have a chance to encourage him/her, to minister to them, to point out areas which need work. It’s a privilege. Think about all the times someone has done that for you. :D

Now, that’s not to say we should spread ourselves thin, but God will honor our sacrifices, the time we spend. He’s put others in our path to bless us and guide us, to cheer us on. Helping other writers is a great way to give back.

Writing for a Wife's Heart by Janet Chester Bly

Today we welcome Janet Chester Bly again as she continues her series on writing for a woman's heart. All month, I've appreciated how open Janet is and how her advice will help writers minister to our readers. Read on!

Writing for a Wife's Heart*
by Janet Chester Bly

Married four years with two sons, I didn’t have a clue how to be a mother or wife. That inadequacy drove me to seek God. Did He exist? If He did, would He would help me in these, my most critical life needs? What I and hubby Stephen learned about our relationship after coming to Christ became part of our book: Be Your Mate’s Best Friend.**

How do you write for a wife’s heart?

First, tally your writer’s template.
What are your marriage experiences? Much has already been written. You must find fresh slants on doing marriage, the ultimate invasion of privacy. What unique insight have you learned that will touch a reader’s heart and catch an editor’s eye?

Second, who is your reader?
Do a profile. What does your reader feel desperate about? Determine her season of life. What’s the status of her marriage? How old is she? What are her prime issues?

What will you say to her?
Tackle her passions. What needs can you address?
According to a poll done by CNN/Time, the following challenges dominate women in general, in order of importance—equal pay, day care, rape, maternity leave at work, job discrimination, abortion, sexual freedom.

Other problems include. . .
Aging and its many facets. Staying sexually attractive. Handling temptations.
Dealing with anger, jealousy, money, food, or pride.

Touch Up Your Style
Sublime versus earthy. Pithy or complex. Serious or comedic. Determine the approach for how you’ll handle the tough and touchy stuff. Check your attitude–-do you recognize every couple’s different? Are you leaving space for grace?

Keep up with social change. Discern the changing moods of our society. Now, interface the real world with the eternal truth of the Bible in a way your reader will respond to. That’s your biggest challenge.

~~~~~

Janet Chester Bly has authored 12 books, plus co-authored 18 more with husband Stephen, including two husband & wife cozy mystery series, The Hidden West Series and The Carson City Chronicles, available at http://BlyBooks.com/store.htm/

*Copyright 2005, 2011
* Check out free article downloads, adapted from Be Your Mate’s Best Friend, at http://BlyBooks.com/articles.htm/

Letting Go … My Path to Publication by Marlo Schalesky

When it comes to your writing career, what are your dreams? This Fortifying Friday, author Marlo Schalesky is here to share a little bit about her own dreams and journey to publication. Many of us will be able to relate to her story. Enjoy!

Letting Go …

My Path to Publication
by Marlo Schalesky

When I was thirteen years old, I wrote a poem on the bus on the way to school. It was about an old tree, forlorn and desolate, standing alone in a field. I read that poem at every recess, tweaked it, polished it, and for the first time, felt the thrill of how the written word can convey profound beauty. That day, I fell in love with writing. I also grabbed on to a dream.

Shortly after that, I told my mother (with all the angst of a newly-turned teenager), “I will just die if I don’t write!” So naturally when I grew up I decided to get my degree in Chemistry (at least I’d figured out how difficult it is to make a living at writing!). And, oddly enough, I didn’t die. I enjoyed chemistry. But always that desire to write was with me, saying “Someday, someday.” Someday, I would follow my dream.

Someday finally came. I knew God was prompting me to write. Finally, I was going to be the next great American novelist, so I wrote a proposal for an end-times series, sent it out, and waited for the contract offers to come pouring in. But, alas, all that poured in were “Dear Author, we regret to inform you that your proposal does not meet our editorial needs” letters.

But this was my dream! How could I get nothing but rejection letters? Next, I started writing articles for various magazines and putting out more proposals for book projects. I thought if I just hit the right idea, I would get the coveted contract in no time.

Instead, it took six years of writing and honing my craft. And more than that, it took giving up my dream entirely. For me, I had to come to a place in my heart where I didn’t have to write to be content. The dream of publication had become an idol in my life. So I had to let go of that strong desire born at thirteen years old and embrace God’s will for me whether that will included writing or not. Only then, only when my dream had given way to God’s, was I offered a contract by Crossway Books for my first published book, Cry Freedom, released in 2000.

Since then, I’ve had six more novels and one nonfiction book published. And, I still write articles. But I also have to keep reminding myself that writing isn’t my dream anymore. My dream has to be to simply follow God, nothing more, nothing less. In a culture that cries out, “Follow your dreams! You can do anything you set your mind to!” I have to remember to keep surrendering my dreams instead, and set my mind on Him, not on the next contract.

Marlo Schalesky is the award winning author of numerous books, including her latest novel Shades of Morning, which combines a love story with a surprise ending twist. Marlo’s other books include the Christy Award winning Beyond the Night, and its sequel If Tomorrow Never Comes. Marlo is also the author of nearly 700 articles, the mother of 6 young children, and holds her Masters in Theology from Fuller Theological Seminary. When she’s not changing diapers, doing laundry, or writing books, Marlo loves sipping Starbucks white mochas, reading the New Testament in Greek, and talking about finding the deep places of God in everyday life.

My website: www.marloschalesky.com or http://www.vividgod.com/
My Tales of Wonder blog: http://www.marloschalesky.blogspot.com/
My Facebook reader page (where we talk about deeper living for everyday people): www.facebook.com/MarloSchalesky
My Twitter: www.twitter.com/MarloSchalesky

He Reigns

Thursdays – Dawn’s Devotions for Writers

“The Lord reigns forever.” (Psalm 9:7 NIV)

Does music affect you? Fill you with joy? Calm your nerves? Move you to tears?

I believe the Holy Spirit uses music as a conduit to speak to us and through us. As a vocalist on a contemporary worship team, I trust the Holy Spirit to use our music in bringing people closer to God’s presence.

I grew up in the Lutheran church, and still attend one. A joke within the denomination is that we’re the “chosen frozen.” Not only because many Lutherans have a Scandinavian heritage and live in the Midwest (where I grew up—freezing winters), but because worship isn’t quite as lively as some. Our church has four bands with accomplished musicians. We use acoustic guitars, electric guitars, bass guitars, keys, and drums. But even with upbeat music, people don’t usually sing loud or raise their hands. I wish it were different.

But every once in awhile … a song stirs even the frozen chosen. Last Sunday, we closed worship with singing “He Reigns,” an upbeat tune that speaks about the song of the forgiven—the Asian believers, the African tribes, all nations and all God’s children singing, “Glory, Glory, Halleluiah, He reigns.”

The song continues with "the powers of darkness, trembling at what they just heard—’cause they can’t drown out a single word."

People not only belted out the lyrics, I watched more than one person raise their hands—caught up in the power of those words.

He reigns. Now and forever.

Don’t forget that, dear friends. When daily stress begins to wear you down. When there doesn’t seem to be an end to a dark tunnel. When you wonder if you’ll ever experience a breakthrough in your writing. When you become weary of trying so hard to fulfill your calling. Remember that our Lord has been victorious over whatever evil may try to discourage and weigh you down.

Glory, glory, halleluiah! He reigns!

Grammar-O

Grammar-O Wednesdays
with Ocieanna

Welcome to grammar day on Seriously Write. If you’re a regular visitor here, you know that Ocieanna, our good friend and fellow blog hostess, went into cardiac arrest early in January. She’s doing well, but needs further rest. In the meantime, Annette and I (Dawn) will carry on in Ocieanna’s place until she can return. Please continue praying for her. Thanks!

Ready to test your skills?

The following sentences may contain grammar, punctuation, spelling, or other writing misdemeanors. Your job is to find the infraction and set it right. Try not to look at the answers below.

Have fun!

Sentences to correct:

1) Have you ever choosen a large, beautiful orange, expecting it to be full of sweet juicy fruit? But, what you found beneath was dry and tasteless? What a disappointment after the taste buds were all primmed?

2) Books with beautiful covers intice me to open the pages and read them. But, its true. You can’t tell a book by it’s cover. A great illustration doesn’t insure great writing and story telling.

3) I own books which are between fifty and sixty-years old. Some covers’ are dull shades of red or green, but most are a shade brown. The covers aren't exciting, but, the stories they contain have taken me on wonderful adventures

4) We may see a house that’s falling apart in the exterior. The yard may be full of weeds and strewn pieces of junk. But for all we know the home could still be full with love.

5) What is it about us that we’re so quick to make judgments based on outward appearances. We’re humen. Terrible flaw, but it shouldn’t be used as an excuse. I’m sure glad God doesn’t focus on the same things we do.



Corrected sentences:

1) Have you ever chosen a large, beautiful orange, expecting it to be full of sweet, juicy fruit? But, what you found inside was dry and tasteless? What a disappointment after the taste buds were all primed.

2) Books with beautiful covers entice me to open the pages and read them. But, it’s true. You can’t tell a book by its cover. A great illustration can’t ensure great writing and storytelling.

3) I own books that are between fifty and sixty years old. Some covers are dull shades of red or green, but most are a shade of brown. The covers aren't exciting, but the stories they contain have taken me on wonderful adventures.

Note: There shouldn't be comma after the word "but" in the last sentence.
Note: Don’t forget the “period” after adventures.

4) We may see a house that’s falling apart on the exterior. The yard may be full of weeds and strewn pieces of junk. But for all we know, the home could still be full of love.

Note: Don’t forget the comma after “know.”
Note: The last sentence could also be written: But for all we know, the home could still be filled with love.

5) What is it about us that we’re so quick to make judgments based on outward appearances? We’re human. Terrible flaw, but it shouldn’t be used as an excuse. I’m sure glad God doesn’t focus on the same things we do.

Note: Don’t forget the question mark after “appearances.”
Note: We don’t need the word “not” in the last sentence.

How well did you do?

I use The Chicago Manual of Style and Webster’s Dictionary as my sources.

Giving Back Series, Part Three: Mentoring

Mentoring
Giving Back Series
Net's Notations Tuesdays

Over the years, I’ve witnessed a lot of selfless giving within the Christian writing community. Authors like Dee Henderson, Susan May Warren, Rachel Hauck, Brandilyn Collins, Colleen Reece and so many others who mentor writers with sincere hopes of their pupil’s success. Then, when one of these “students” signs a contract or publishes an article, the mentor cheers from the sidelines, genuinely pleased with the breakthrough.

It takes a servant’s heart to mentor someone and a lot of grace to wish someone well in their writing, as you strive for success as well. Hmm… a servant’s heart, and grace. Reminds me of God and His character.

Mentoring was His idea. In the Bible, He directs people who are farther along in their journey as Christians or life to mentor those who are less far along.

It’s natural (and wise) for writers to be recipients for a long time—years, in fact. We sit as students, learning, growing, receiving, taking lessons in.

But then the time comes when we recognize we have something to give. There are writers coming up behind us who haven’t learned about deep POV, in-depth character sketches, subtexts, marketing, or platform. We have something to offer, and not just in teaching. Encouragement too. You can reassure someone else as they learn to wait for responses from editors or agents. You can nudge them to begin new projects, help them brainstorm plots, critique their work. I've been very grateful for the mentors God has brought into my life.

Mentoring relationships often just happen. Circumstance and timing align and viola! You have yourself a mentor or a mentee. You don’t have to force it. Just be willing, should God nudge you in that direction.

I saw a great quote on Facebook recently from worshiper Darrell Evans, who graciously permitted me to share it with you: “Ministry is always about serving someone else’s destiny.” Mentoring is a form of ministry, another great way to give back.

Do you have a mentor? How has he/she blessed your writing life?

Writing for a Mother's Heart by Janet Chester Bly

Janet Chester Bly is here all month for Manuscript Mondays to share tips on writing for women. This week--writing for a mother's heart. Whether you write fiction or non-fiction, she has wisdom to share. Enjoy!

Writing for a Mother's Heart*
by Janet Chester Bly

My husband Stephen had a proposal accepted by Moody Press for his book, How To Be A Good Dad. I warned him that I could never do a follow-up for moms. I had a lot of insecurities about motherhood. To try to live up to “how to be a good mom” rattled me.

When the offer finally came, I asked to co-author with hubby, that’s how I handled it. Later, when I got a chance to write If My Kids Drive Me Crazy, Am I A Bad Mom?, I could live with this title.

Writing for mothers requires your most gut-level sharing.

What’s Your Story?

First, dig out your journal. Reflect on your experiences.
Second, don’t threaten anyone else’s privacy or comfort level.
Third, listen to your heart—what about mothering is important to you?
Fourth, has anything you’ve tried worked for you?
Fifth, can you back your premises with research?
Sixth, step up your style. Cut the schmaltz. Throw out creative lifelines for the most overworked, often under-trained segment of our society.

Who Is Your Reader?
Determine what sort of Mom for whom you will write. Is she a . . .

Stay-At-Home Mom. . .who may struggle with living on one income.

Homeschooler Mom. . .who centers her life on the care and education of her children.

Career Mom. . .who takes care of her kids in between appointments, conference calls, office hours.

Mom Who Needs Time With Her Peers. . .she’s looking for moms’ groups, support outlets, social outings.

Single Mom. . .loneliness, sexual issues, paying the bills, kids feeling wanted.

Mom With ‘Doing Marriage’ Challenges. . .spouse priorities during parenting years, becoming a couple-centered relationship.

Mom with Babies. . .after LaMaze there’s lactation, toilet training, childcare, to work or not to work.

Mom of School-Aged Kids. . .Kindergarten Readiness Skills, angst for parents who are competitive, ADD & ADHD, birth order, identifying kids with risk factors, dealing with guilt--how can she have the career she wants, a great marriage and still be a good mother?

Mom of Teens. . .survival tips for keeping sanity, dealing with critical social issues.

Who’s Slipping Through the Cracks?
Look around you—whose needs aren’t being met?

The Not Quite Empty Nest Mom. . .when her grown kids keep returning home.**

Moms With Problem Kids. . .strong wills, out-of-control, me-centered, criminal tendencies, prodigals

The 24/7 Nursemaid Mom. . .caregivers of handicapped or ill kids.

Mom as Spiritual Being. . .may not be able to read her Bible on a regular basis, needs simple systems of spiritual disciplines.

Moms Overwhelmed. . .unfaithful spouse, addictions, weight problems.

The Changing Family. . .stay-at-home dads, parents working alternate shifts, women choosing to stay single but with children.

Are You Qualified?
Readers want advice from experts. Experts are a) those with degrees and careers, b) those with five children or more who still have stamina to write a book, c) those with special needs children who are willing to share secrets.

If you aren’t an expert, be sure to interview some pros in the field. Or rely on other respected resources with quotes or stats.

The main sources for your topics will come from other moms. Listen to their questions. Pay attention to comments. Record the stories you hear.

~~~~~

Janet Chester Bly has authored 12 books and co-authored 18 others with husband, Stephen, including How To Be A Good Mom, available at http://BlyBooks.com/store.htm/ Get a free study guide download of If My Kids Drive Me Crazy, Am I A Bad Mom at http://www.blybooks.com/janet.html Also check out our blog: http://BlyBooks.blogspot.com

* copyright 2005, 2011
** sample book: Just Because They’ve Left Doesn’t Mean They’re Gone, Stephen Bly, later retitled, Once a Parent, Always a Parent.

You Can Do This IF ... by Nancy Rue

Do you have romantic ideas of what a writer’s life should look like? We’ve probably all had them at one time or another. But what does it really take to be a writer? This Fortifying Friday, author Nancy Rue is here to share what she’s learned in her own career.

You Can Do This IF . . .
by
Nancy Rue

Whenever I meet a new person who asks, “What do you do?”, and I say, “I’m a writer,” –about 8 times out of 10 the person goes straight from there to, “I’ve always wanted to write.”

I love that in one sense. It makes my career sound like something other people want to do. I don’t think if I answered, “I’m a prison warden,” many folks would say, “I’ve dreamed of doing that myself!”

Still, I always have to decide whether to pursue that conversation or go with, “SO how ‘bout those Mets?”, because the person who wistfully expresses the desire to write can actually be saying one of a number of different things:

(1) “I think it would be a glamour gig.”
(2) “I think it would be fabulous to see my name on the cover of a book.”
(3) “I would actually do it if I had time.”
(4) “I’m trying to change my life situation so I can spend time doing this thing that’s in my soul.”
(5) “I am at this very moment spending every spare moment working on a piece that comes from someplace deep within me and won’t leave me alone.”

Since I would rather talk about writing than just about anything else except my new granddaughter, I usually try to tease out which kind of would-be writer I’m chatting with. Because here’s the deal. Being an author has almost nothing to do with book tours, signings with lines of people trailing out of the bookstore and down to the corner, and interviews on Oprah. After 110 books, I have yet to do any of the above. Seeing your name in print is definitely a rush, but getting it there is a long, sweat-producing, hair-pulling, housework-neglecting process. It’s like eating an artichoke, you know? You have to decide it if it’s worth it.

As for doing it if you had time? That leads us to the crux of the matter. If you are truly a writer, you don’t wait until you have time. You make time. You do Number Four and rearrange your schedule, your priorities, and your furniture—whatever it takes so you can focus in a significant way on this gift you’ve been given to share. And if you are born to be a writer, created to craft words to change lives, you don’t wait until you’ve made those changes. You do it anyway—in the car while the kids are at soccer practice, in the doctor’s office even when People Magazine is calling your name, at five in the morning before everyone else is up.

And if you come up with excuses why none of that will work for you, you’re not a writer.

I don’t actually say that to people I meet on airplanes or backyard barbecues. But I’m saying it to you, who yearn to be writers. You can do this thing—IF you know in every part of yourself that this is what God is calling you to do—IF you’re willing to give up anything other than your spiritual practices and your family and your financial survival to do it—IF you can’t imagine yourself doing anything else with the rest of your life.

Without that kind of passion in your soul, you can still dabble, and there is nothing wrong with that. There is also nothing wrong with channeling your heart cry for writing into work you do for newsletters, stories for your kids, memoirs for your own satisfaction. All I’m saying is, pay attention to what’s going on in your heart of hearts. If it’s there, this relentless drive to speak on the page, don’t let anything stand in your way. Because that, my writing friends, is God talking.




Nancy Rue is the author of 110 books, including 9 novels for adults, 17 for teens, and 60 for tween readers, as well as 2 parenting books, 32 non-fiction books for tweens and teens, and the features for the FaithGirlz Bible. Her Lily Series, published by Zondervan, has sold well over one million copies. Her ability to relate to a wide audience has made her a popular radio and television guest and an in-demand speaker and teacher for writer’s conferences across the country. She has been a regular keynoter for The Young Writer’s Institute and Virtuous Reality Ministries, and now anchors Zondervan’s Beauty of Believing Tour for FaithGirlz, which draws thousands of tween girls and their moms. Nancy is also the founder of the “Writing for Children and Youth Conference” in Glen Eyrie, Colorado. Her latest titles include The Reluctant Prophet for adult readers (David C. Cook) Limos, Lattes, and My Life On the Fringe (Zondervan) for teens, and That Is SO Me (Zondervan), a year-long devotional for tweens. A student of the Academy for Spiritual Formation, sponsored by the Upper Room, Nancy continues her own spiritual journey even as she writes and speaks for mothers, daughters, and would-be writers about theirs.

For more information, visit her website at http://www.nancyrue.com/.
And her blog at http://tweenyouandme.typepad.com/in_real_life_/

To Be Heard

Thursdays – Dawn’s Devotions for Writers

“O Lord, I call to you; come quickly to me.
Hear my voice when I call to you.” (Psalm 141:1 NIV)

Everyone wants to be heard.

Have you ever sat in a meeting or tried to carry on a conversation with someone who won’t let anyone else get a word in? The person rambles on for so long, you being to wonder if he’ll ever take a breath. He’s so absorbed in what he has to say, no one else gets a chance to offer his opinions or ideas. Oblivious to other people's body language, the speaker’s only concern is that he’s heard.

I think we can sometimes be like that individual when it comes to our relationship with God. We may say, “Hear my prayer, O God; listen to the words of my mouth” (Psalm 54:2 NIV). Or like David in Psalm 141, we may call out to God, expecting him to rush to our side, sit quietly, and listen to whatever is on our mind.

Should we go to God with our concerns? Our hope and dreams? Our disappointments? Yes!

But in any healthy relationship—whether it involves a husband and wife, a parent and child, or two friends—it’s important that both listen, and both are heard.

Our heavenly Father also desires a two-way relationship.

It doesn’t do much good for God to offer healing words of comfort or direction in our lives if we’re not listening.

When you sit with him and ask him to bless your writing—when you ask for direction—remember to also take time to listen.

“Give ear and come to me; hear me, that your soul may live” (Isaiah 55:3 NIV).

God is more than willing to hear our pleas—our cries for help—but he also wants to be heard.

Metaphor and Simile

Hey everyone, it's Grammar-O Wednesday again. Annette here. Please continue praying for Ocieanna as she regains her strength following a cardiac arrest in early January. She's doing better and really appreciates your prayers.

Last time I filled in for O, we discussed rhetorical devices at large. Today, let’s break down two specific forms—metaphor and simile. These are similar in that they both have to do with comparison. Let’s define them and then practice using them.

Metaphor “compares two different things by speaking of one in terms of the other” (From Virtual Salt’s rhetorical device handbook.) This rhetorical device “asserts that one thing is another thing” not just like something else. Basically, you're making a comparison in order to paint a clear picture for the reader.

Example: “I am the Light of the world.” Jesus speaking in John 8:12, 9:5

Example: "Your baby is an angel."

Simile “is a comparison between two different things that resemble each other…” Similes are often rendered using “like” (for comparing a noun to a noun) or “as” (for comparing verbs or phrases to other verbs or phrases).*

Example: “And he looked up and said, ‘I see men like trees, walking.’” Mark 8:24, NKJV

Example: “As for man, his days are like grass; as a flower of the field, so he flourishes.” Psalm 103:15, NKJV)

Example: "You sing like an angel."

Now, let’s test ourselves, shall we?

___ Metaphor or Simile — Jesus said, “I am the Bread of life.” from John 6:35

___ Metaphor or Simile — Sometimes on hot, summer days I nap like a cat near a sunny window. (notice the alliteration with “s,” as well)

___ Metaphor or Simile — Some drivers crank their music so loud, their cars become stereos on wheels.

___ Metaphor or Simile — “I am the Way, the Truth and the Life.” ~ Jesus from John 14:6

___ Metaphor or Simile — The sunflower opened toward the sun like a smiling face.


ANSWERS:

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How'd you do? Feel free to add examples in the comments below.

* Definitions adapted from Virtual Salt's rhetorical device handbook. See this link for more information on rhetorical devices.

Giving Back Series, Part Two: Speaking

Hey everyone, Annette here. Last week we discussed volunteering your time. This week's topic can be on a volunteer basis, or a paid basis, but it does involve giving your time.

Let's talk about speaking at a school or teaching workshops.

A few years ago, my good friend (and Seriously Write cohost) Ocieanna Fleiss asked me to speak at her MOPS group. What a treat! The date? Valentine’s Day so we discussed marriage, I believe, and because it was a Christian setting, I brought God into the discussion.

When my older children were in elementary school, their teachers and I talked about the possibility of me coming in and sharing with the students about writing—making it fun. The timing never worked. But I’ve heard of many authors prepping and visiting classrooms with their lessons.

We had a teacher’s aid in my ninth grade English class who made all the difference for me as a budding writer. She taught us about character sketches, gave us names like Oogie and some normal names and assigned us to give our characters traits and write a story about them. I loved that assignment. My imagination went wild. That was the beginning of a love of fiction writing for me.

One speaker can make all the difference.

Now, I realize all the speaking engagements out there aren’t all volunteer opportunities. At times you’ll get paid for them, or reimbursed for travel.

But either way, your words have an impact—spoken or written. Why not volunteer to share your words as a speaker? You can speak to church groups, writers, students, etc. You never know how your teaching might impact someone else. The T.A. from my English may never know. But I’ll never forget.

Volunteering to speak is another way we can give back.

Writing for a Woman's Heart by Janet Chester Bly

Happy Manuscript Monday, dear readers! Is it difficult for you to open your heart and share your own struggles? This month, we welcome Janet Chester Bly to share her series on writing for women. She shares that the best way to minister is to be honest and open about your own struggles. Fiction or non-fiction writers can glean from this topic. Read on!

Writing for a Woman's Heart
by Janet Chester Bly

Driving home from my last day on the job, after helping hubby Stephen get through seminary, I wondered what God wanted me to do next. Hubby had been called to be a pastor, so I asked him. “That’s easy,” he said, “you’ll do stuff for me and stuff for the church.” Well, I wanted a more specific job description. . .which eventually led to the discovery of writing as a spiritual gift and the impetus for one of my first books for women: Managing Your Restless Search/Finding Your Place of Service in God’s Plan.*

What Are The Steps To Write for Women?

First, open your own heart.

A writer who shines draws from her own felt needs first. She addresses issues that hit women where they live. She finds a hot topic that fits her and meets a need in the marketplace.

Second, look into your past.

Where have you struggled? What problems have you faced and found some answers?
What personal experiences make you qualified to opine on certain subjects?

Third, solve the issues in your own life.

You don’t have to be perfect, but you need to be a woman in process. Be honest with yourself before you mete out advice to others. Take the wisdom you’ve gained and pass it down as practical helps to others.

Fourth, listen to your own voice.

What is the central theme you come back to over and over again? What are the ideas that don’t seem to go away? What is your life message?

Fifth, determine to be transparent, honest.

This is crucial to minister life-changing insights to other women. Let your genuineness show through from your heart to hers.

Sixth, define your present.

Who are you right now—education, career, hobbies, experiences? Before you try writing/selling a book, have you written articles on the subject? Are you willing to do proper research with reading, interviews, perhaps travel, if needed? Above all, can you walk what you write?

Seventh, listen to her voice.

Pay attention to other women. Hear her concerns, the passion of her heart. Jane Struck, editor of Today’s Christian Woman, says, “If two or three friends bring up the same topic, then it’s a hot topic.”

Subscribe to women’s magazines and blogs. Read advice columns and women’s how-tos and fiction. Scan Letters to the Editor. Go to women’s conferences. What trends catch your interest? What are her main problems? Sometimes when you listen to whines, you get writing ideas.

Eighth, study the Scriptures.

What does God say about a woman’s heart? Line up what you have to say with eternal truth.
Ninth, touch the emotions.

Make her laugh. Make her cry. Tell compelling, true stories, such as in Hope Lives Here.*
Tenth, provide help, hope and healing. . .with a special oomph.

Be creative with catchy principles. Give her handy things to do. Study what’s already out there—make it as good or better. Develop a different slant. Explain why your manuscript should be published, compared to what’s already in the market.

To write for a woman’s heart, you must expound from your own. Be honest about who you are, where you are. Study what’s already being said—how can you say it differently or better?

~~~~~

Janet Chester Bly has authored and co-authored with husband Stephen 30 books, including Words To Live By For Women, Friends Forever, Hope Lives Here, Awakening Your Sense of Wonder, How To Be A Good Mom and The Heart of a Runaway/Hope & Understanding For The Woman Who Longs To Escape. Find out more at http://BlyBooks.com and http://BlyBooks.blogspot.com

* Managing Your Restless Search and Hope Lives Here, as well as other Bly books available at http://BlyBooks.com/store.htm/

Confidence Meets Humility by Stephanie Morrill

Let’s face it. The road to getting a contract and our novels in print can be filled rejection. But by listening, persevering, and being will to change, it’s possible to reach the coveted destination. We’re happy that author Stephanie Morrill is here today to share her own journey to publication. Enjoy!

Confidence Meets Humility
by Stephanie Morrill

In early 2006, I attended the Florida Christian Writers conference. I was 22 and knew the manuscript I brought was The Book—the one that would get me published.

“What do you write?” someone asked me as we ate.

“Young adult fiction,” I said.

An agent happened to be listening. “Young adult fiction?” He snorted. “Who’s buying that these days?”

But YA fiction was what God have given me to write, and it was all I knew to do.

Despite the agent’s words, I left that conference with advice from an editor that required a rewrite of The Book, plus an invitation to submit to a semi-major publishing house once I’d done said rewrite.

I did what a smart writer does—I rewrote.

I grumbled in the beginning, but once I got going, I saw how the changes improved the story. Now it was perfect, I felt.

In the spring of 2007, I had not only a full manuscript under consideration at the semi-major publishing house (not The Book, since rewrites were taking so long, and they agreed to see something else by me), but also two agents were considering The Book, and I’d entered the first couple chapters in a contest. For months I’d heard nothing but “yes” from agents and editors alike, and I felt I’d be signing a contract of some sort any day now.

But then the rejections started.

First, by one of the agents. Fine. I’d considered her out of my league anyway.

Then, after 7 months of waiting, a form rejection came in the mail from the semi-major publishing house. A major blow.

Followed quickly by bombing the contest I’d entered, and receiving a descriptive, honest rejection from the remaining agent. The judges and the agent felt the same way—they hated my main character.

My reaction was typical—they were all wrong, of course. They just didn’t get it, and I wouldn’t change a single word for them.

This lasted a couple weeks.

Then I built the courage to look at the judges’ and agent’s comments once more. Maybe they weren’t total morons. Maybe I could incorporate a couple of their suggestions. Do some minor tweaking.

I had a month before my next conference. I was pregnant with my daughter at the time, and knew in my heart that this was my last hurrah at getting published. If it didn’t happen now, my husband and I had agreed, I would postpone my publication dream for a couple years.

My “tweaking” quickly turned into rewrite number three. I managed to get a couple chapters in good shape for the conference, where I wound up accidentally (another story for another time) pitching The Book to the agent who’d already rejected it. To my shock, she requested to take another look at the first chapter.

For the next couple months, I balanced book edits with diaper changes. While stressful, there was peace in my heart because I could see God’s help along the way. The agent requested to see the first 100 pages mere days after I’d finished them. And in April, when she called and asked me to send her the full manuscript, it was within 24 hours of me finishing edits.

The Book is now called Me, Just Different, and it reads quite differently than the manuscript I toted to my first conference. Getting published required a balance of confidence and humility. Confidence in God’s plan for my life, and humility to hear criticism and make changes. Without those, I wouldn’t have had this:

Stephanie Morrill is a twenty-something living in Overland Park, Kansas with her husband and two kids. Her only talents are reading, writing, and drinking coffee, so career options were somewhat limited. Fortunately, she discovered a passion for young adult novels a few years ago and has been writing them ever since. Stephanie is the author of The Reinvention of Skylar Hoyt series and is currently working on other young adult projects. She enjoys encouraging and teaching teen writers and does so on her blog www.GoTeenWriters.com. To connect with Stephanie and read samples of her books, check out www.StephanieMorrillBooks.com.

To Be a Healer

Thursdays – Dawn’s Devotions for Writers

“So they set out and went from village to village, preaching

the gospel and healing people everywhere.” (Luke 9:6 NIV)

While a young teen, I thought I wanted to be a doctor—more specifically, a missionary doctor. I had romantic ideas about what it would be like to go to Africa and save starving children’s lives. That probably had something to do with the movies I watched at the time—like Tarzan, and The Singing Nun.

As an older teen, I seriously thought about serving as a medical missionary in the jungle called New York City, saving drug addicts, runaways, and prostitutes. That dream was largely influenced by the number of books I read by Reverend David Wilkerson. Remember The Cross and the Switchblade?

In college, I majored in biology and received excellent grades in that area, but barely survived getting a minor in chemistry. I realized that I didn’t have what it took to get into a medical program. And with a little time, I discovered that I was okay with that. I accepted that I wasn’t going to be a healer.

God had other plans.

Luke 9:6 says, “So they set out and went from village to village, preaching the gospel and healing people everywhere.” This verse is talking about the power Jesus gave the disciples to physically heal people and cure them of the diseases that plagued their bodies.

But healing comes in different forms. I think when the disciples preached the gospel—along with physical healings—emotional and spiritual healings also took place.

We have the opportunity as writers to help the healing process with words.

When someone is hurting, but reads about God’s love, grace, and forgiveness in our devotions, articles, or stories—their wounds may begin to heal. When they see characters in novels they can relate to, and those characters find hope, the reader begins to believe they can also have hope. They wonder if broken relationships really can be mended with God’s help. They look at the possibility that God does have a plan for their lives.

When someone has experienced a bad day, a few written words causing laughter can lighten the load and lift the spirit. And a note of encouragement to someone who's discouraged can make all the difference in that person having the courage to not give up.

Our tools aren’t medicines, scalpels, or sutures. Our healing tool is simply the pen.

Write on, dear friends. We have important work to do.

Grammar-O

Grammar-O Wednesdays
with Ocieanna

Welcome to grammar day on Seriously Write. If you’re a regular visitor here, you know that Ocieanna, our good friend and fellow blog hostess, went into cardiac arrest early in January. She’s doing well, but needs further rest. In the meantime, Annette and I (Dawn) will carry on in Ocieanna’s place until she can return. Please continue praying for her. Thanks!


Ready to test your skills?

The following sentences may contain grammar, punctuation, spelling, or other writing misdemeanors. Your job is to find the infraction and set it right. Try not to look at the answers below.

Have fun!

Sentences to correct:

1) We live in a techno crazed world. There was a time when blackberrys were used in making jams and pies.

2) Now the Blackberry is a gadget which includes a mobile phone, email, a silent messaging system, and internet access.

3) I admit to having a cell phone, it’s a helpful tool. My car has experienced a few flat tires that I didn’t care to change on my own. After all, what intelligent women wants to reck her newly polished nails on a good pair of slacks when AAA is only a call away?

4) You can’t go anywhere without seeing someone talking on a cell phone. People attach them to their ear while driving, shopping, and attempting business transactions. Some conversations rely important information: others occur to help alleviate boredom.

5) In movie theaters, stage performances, and aboard airplanes, people have to be reminded to turn off their cell phones in order to not to be disruptive. And how many times during worship has your pastor been forced to ignore a cell phone ringing while delivering a message?

6) This has all led to me thinking about prayer. In comparison to the amount of time we spend chatting on our cell phones, how much time do we spend conversing with our Lord?


Corrected sentences:

1) We live in a techno-crazed world. There was a time when blackberries were used in making jams and pies.

2) Now the BlackBerry is a gadget that includes a mobile phone, e-mail, a silent messaging system, and Internet access.

Note: Which clauses require commas; that clauses do not require commas.

3) I admit to having a cell phone; it’s a helpful tool. My car has experienced a few flat tires that I didn’t care to change on my own. After all, what intelligent woman wants to wreck her newly polished nails or a good pair of slacks when AAA is only a call away?

4) You can’t go anywhere without seeing someone talking on a cell phone. People attach them to their ears while driving, shopping, and attempting business transactions. Some conversations relay important information; others occur to help alleviate boredom.

5) In movie theaters, before stage performances, and aboard airplanes, people have to be reminded to turn off their cell phones in order to not be disruptive. And how many times during worship has your pastor, while delivering a message, been forced to ignore a cell phone ringing?

Note: I removed an extra “to” after the word “not” in the first sentence.
Note: The way the second sentence was originally written, the cell phone could be delivering a message.

6) This has all led me to think about prayer. In comparison to the amount of time we spend chatting on our cell phones, how much time do we spend conversing with our Lord?

How well did you do?

I use The Chicago Manual of Style and Webster’s Dictionary as my sources.

Giving Back Series, Part One: Volunteering

Volunteering
Giving Back Series
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Last month we spoke of gathering tools and being dedicated students of writing craft. We’ve been recipients, and of course, to some extent, that will continue. This month, let’s discuss giving back.

Raise your hand if you’ve ever volunteered—in any capacity: church nursery, food pantry, feeding the homeless, ministries at church. Doesn’t it feel good to help others? Absolutely! One way we stay refreshed as Christians is through serving.

Now, raise your hand if you belong to a writer’s group. Perhaps you could volunteer to serve on the board, or begin a new local group, as an extension of that national group. What if your time is limited? Perhaps you could go early to the meeting and help set up, or stay a tad later and help with tear down. Perhaps you could volunteer to write a newsletter or edit the group’s brochure.

Ask yourself: where can I volunteer to share my writing skills, or even do manual labor as needed for meetings? One group I belonged to needed someone to head up the refreshments table. That's another option.

In late February, ACFW board met in preparation for their annual conference. These committed volunteers are giving their time as well as their expertise, to help other writers.

How can you give your time or your expertise? As we plant seeds in our writing lives, we're investing in our future. God promises we will reap in due season if we don't give up. Where are you planting seeds?

God both asks us to be servants, and rewards those who serve. How will you practice giving back this year?