Showing posts with label #suspense. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #suspense. Show all posts

Thursday, June 8, 2017

Six Tips for Writing Romantic Suspense by Connie Mann

My favorite stories have always been romantic suspense. I love danger and spine-tingling suspense almost as much as I love getting swept away by a good love story. So what could be more fun than stories that put the two together? 

To make it work, you have to blend both of those elements. The authors who do it well make it seem effortless, but as we all know, once you sit down to write your own story, things get a wee bit more complicated. If you’re thinking about writing romantic suspense, here are some things to consider before you start.

1-Romance/Suspense Ratio

Depending on your personal preference and/or publisher guidelines, the ratio of suspense vs. romance can vary quite a bit. My new release, HIDDEN THREAT, has been called a ‘character-driven suspense’ because I spent a bit more time developing the characters on the front end, but then I ramped up the danger and upped the pace as the story raced toward the finish line. Other books start with a bang (sometimes literally) and don’t let up the pace until the last page. The romance is there, of course, but it takes up less space. Spend a bit of time thinking through where your story fits along the spectrum. 

2-Choose Your Setting

Make sure your setting is interesting. Think about the specific locations, features and even weather patterns unique to that setting. Use them –and make sure you take a sentence or two to describe them. When I have to page back in a story, trying to figure out where, exactly, I am in the world, I get frustrated and feel like the author missed an opportunity. Use your setting. Weave it into the fabric of your story so that it wouldn’t work if you moved it elsewhere.

3-Know Your Villain

Ever character in your story views him/herself as the hero of their own story, including the villain. They have reasons they do what they do and they need to be good ones. We may not like them, but they need to be believable, fully fleshed-out characters. No cardboard cutouts. The villain also needs to be strong enough that readers worry whether our hero/heroine can defeat them in the end. The stronger the conflict and higher the stakes, the better the story.

4-Add Red Herrings

You don’t want a plot that runs in a straight line, with an ending that’s obvious by chapter three. Readers tell me they love it when I keep them guessing about the villain’s identity until the very end. The only way to do that effectively is through red herrings. Who else could have done it? Who else had motive? Means? Opportunity? Use false trails and misdirection to keep readers worrying and guessing until the story’s big reveal.

5-Remember the Romance

Sometimes, the romance can get buried under all the running and bullet-dodging. As you think through the plot, make sure you allow the characters a bit of down time, some breathing room between action scenes. That’s a good time to turn the focus onto the couple’s relationship and deepen the romance. But choose wisely. A long, drawn-out discussion and lingering kiss while bullets are flying will seriously annoy your readers.

6-Tie up the Loose Ends

After the big climactic scenes where the villain is defeated and the guy gets the girl, you need to make sure you’ve tied up those other threads and picked up the breadcrumbs you sprinkled throughout the story, too. If you’ve created secondary characters readers care about, they want to know how things turned out for them, too. Make sure you give them that closure.

If this still sounds daunting, remember that like everything else in writing, it takes time and practice to make it work well. I certainly don’t have it all figured out, but I learn something new with every story I write. Read extensively in the genre and take time to analyze the books to see how the author built the story. Happy writing. I’ll look forward to reading your new romantic suspense.

What are your favorite kinds of stories? What appeals to you about them?

Connie Mann is a licensed boat captain and the author of romantic suspense novels Tangled Lies, Angel Falls and Trapped. Her latest novel, Hidden Threat, (book 2 of the Safe Harbor series) is now available from Waterfall Press. When she’s not dreaming up plotlines, you’ll find “Captain Connie” on Central Florida’s waterways, introducing boats full of schoolchildren to their first alligator. She’s also passionate about helping women and children in developing countries break the poverty cycle. She and her hubby love traveling and spending time on the water with their grown children and extended family. (Hubby says they are good at fishing, but lousy at catching.) Visit Connie online at www.conniemann.com

HIDDEN THREAT

She’ll uncover who’s poisoning her hometown—at any cost.
 
An environmental crisis is the last thing clean-water crusader Eve Jackson expected in her hometown. She’s used to taking on powerful DC politicians in her fight, but when a baby in Safe Harbor, Florida, shows mysterious signs of possible poisoning, the danger hits painfully close to home, stirring memories of her own mother’s death.
 
Eve’s search leads her to the Sutton Ranch, now run by her high school crush, Cole. Focused on keeping the family ranch afloat as a series of deformed calves are born to his herd, Cole has no time for Eve’s crusade. But as her unwelcome questioning ostracizes her from locals, Cole’s irritation turns to intrigue—not only about the source of the poisoned water but also the tenacious, loyal, and passionate woman determined to help.
 
As Eve digs deeper into Cole’s operation, she sees her suspicions in Sutton Ranch may be misplaced. Yet she can’t shake the feeling that his ranch, and perhaps his past, hold the answers she seeks. When the sabotage escalates, the two must work together to uncover the culprit—if they can survive the investigation.

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Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Brainstorming Villains – Creepy In Layers by Michelle Lim

Michelle Lim
Posts on Tuesdays usually refer to overcoming some sort of obstacle in life or in our writing, but today we have the wonderful Michelle Lim discussing how to make our characters' miserable through our villains. This was originally posted on her blog, Thoughts on Plot, but she's graciously allowed me to repost it here for you today. I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. ~ Angie

There are some villains we see in our lives, on TV shows, or on the news that are creepy to the tenth degree. Those kinds of villains are easier to splash on the page than the less obvious villain.

How do you build a creepy villain when they are less than obvious to the average person?

You build creepy in layers.

We often build layers in our characters, but our villains need them to, especially if they are building the impending doom for your characters.

Creepy Layers Every Villain Should Have:

  1. Motivations that make them evil. Villains need motivations for what they do, just like our other characters. Their motivations don’t need to seem normal to the rest of us, but they need to have some.
  2. Private moments to enjoy their wickedness. In your story include some scenes that show the wickedness of the villain’s thought world or private actions.
  3. Power over the hero or heroine in some way. Show how the villain is powerful to impact the hero or heroine’s world. ( I learned this tip from Susan May Warren through My Book Therapy.)
  4. Proximity to the hero or heroine who is unaware of the danger they are in. This often adds a lot of conflict to a scene and gives opportunity to build the tension.
  5. Public face that hides the truth and often makes those who suspect them seem judgmental. This will allow your hero or heroine to feel guilt when suspecting the villain.
  6. Reflect their villain nature in their scene surroundings. If you have a gritty villain, show that in the setting. If you have a serial killer they will have a much darker setting. Build the darkness of your villain in the scene’s story world. This allows you to show the evil without making it easy for the hero/heroine to recognize their darkness.

What layers do you think make a villain creepy?

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About the Author
Idea Sparking: How to Brainstorm
Conflict in Your Novel
by Michelle Lim
Author Michelle Lim is the Brainstorming/Huddle Coach with My Book Therapy Press and the Midwest Zone Director for American Christian Fiction Writers. Her romantic suspense is represented with Books & Such Literary Agency. Michelle writes devotionals for The Christian Pulse Online and Putting On The New as well as articles for her own blog, thoughtsonplot@wordpress.com. Since her nonfiction book release, Idea Sparking: How To Brainstorm Conflict In Your Novel, through public speaking and online chats Michelle helps writers discover the revolutionary power of brainstorming to bring new life to their stories.

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Idea Sparking: How to Brainstorm Conflict in Your Novel 
Plotting a riveting and compelling story that stands out from the thousands of novels on the bookshelf takes creativity and strategic thinking. An author must learn to think outside the box, and yet create conflict reasonable and personal to their characters. Whether you love to plot out every infinite detail in your story before writing, or prefer to discover your story on the journey, Idea Sparking: How to Brainstorm Conflict in Your Novel is the tool you need to create the right conflict to build a powerful story.