Friday, January 19, 2018

Walking the Tightrope with a Spiritual Arc by Carol Ashby

Carol Ashby
As Christian writers, our goal is often to inspire people in their faith. But, how do we stay true to what we’re called to write while still meeting the challenge of what may or may not sell in today’s market? Author Carol Ashby shares some thoughts. ~ Dawn


Walking the 
Tightrope with 
a Spiritual Arc

I love a deep dive into a story where people start with conflicting world views and maybe as enemies, then grow to understand and even love each other when God has His way in their lives. Nothing satisfies like the roller coaster of hope, despair, and new hope as a character struggles with faith, forgiveness, and love that goes far beyond romance.

But many writer’s blogs and books on the craft tell us novels shouldn’t probe how a person moves from skepticism to belief. Such stories can turn off readers and hurt sales. That’s a risk most traditional publishers won’t take, especially with a debut author. It’s better to treat issues of faith more as background than as the real meat of the story.

But what if that’s the kind of stories you feel God calling you to write? How does an author find the right balance between writing stories where the spiritual arc of a main character is at the core of the plot and writing novels that enough readers will buy to sell the thousands of copies in the first six months that traditional publishers need?

The answer is…I don’t know. I’ve chosen to self-publish to avoid that problem. But my goal isn’t having thousands of readers waiting for my next novel to appear. It’s obeying God’s call and doing my very best for Him. I’m willing to dedicate uncounted hours to learning the writer’s craft so a publisher would reject my manuscript based on platform and not literary quality. I’ll gladly edit to refine and tighten a manuscript until I can’t find anything that must be changed.

Why? I want each novel to have the ring of truth. Characters should be flesh-and-blood people who wrestle with living the faith when their heart’s desire might be pulling them away from it. Who of us hasn’t experienced that? And what we’ve learned in our own struggles can help our characters become “real.”

For characters who don’t start as believers, that means dragging them through trials that lead to questions and arguments like I’ve shared with friends as they try to decide what to do with Jesus in their own lives. Making that choice can be fairly easy or dreadfully difficult in real life. How can we make the spiritual arc in our stories reflect that in a way that feels real?

Readers don’t want novels to read like sermons. Spiritual discussions can’t simply be tacked onto the story. They should flow naturally from the action so they feel real instead of contrived.

That can be a tightrope walk, and we shouldn’t do it alone. When writing scenes with deep spiritual content, I call on my prayer partners. Then they review what I’ve written, asking “Does this feel like real people having real conversations and making believable decisions?”

When the answer comes back “yes,” I give thanks and dream of how those words might serve God’s purpose in a reader’s heart.

If your story has a strong spiritual arc, how do you find the right balance?





When Rome has taken everything, what’s left for a man to give?

Betrayed by a ruthless son who’ll do anything for power and wealth, Publius Drusus faces death with an unanswered prayer―that his treasured daughter, Claudia, and honorable son, Titus, will someday share his faith. But who will lead them to the truth once he’s gone?

Claudia’s oldest brother Lucius arranged their father’s execution to inherit everything, and now he’s forcing her to marry a cruel Roman power broker. If only she could get to Titus―a thousand miles away in Thracia. Then the man who secretly told her father about Jesus arranges for his son Philip to sneak her out of Rome and take her to the brother she can trust.

A childhood accident scarred Philip’s face. A woman’s rejection scarred his heart. Claudia’s gratitude grows into love, but what can Philip do when the first woman who returns his love hates the God he loves even more?

Titus and Claudia hunger for revenge on their brother and the Christians they blame for their father’s deadly conversion. When Titus buys Miriam, a secret Christian, to serve his sister, he starts them all down a path of conflicting loyalties and dangerous decisions. His father’s final letter commands the forgiveness Titus refuses to give. What will it take to free him from the hatred poisoning his own heart?




Carol Ashby has been a professional writer for most of her life, but her articles and books were about lasers and compound semiconductors (the electronics that make cell phones, laser pointers, and LED displays work). She still writes about light, but her Light in the Empire series tells stories of difficult friendships and life-changing decisions in dangerous times, where forgiveness and love open hearts to discover their own faith in Christ. Her fascination with the Roman Empire was born during her first middle-school Latin class. A research career in New Mexico inspires her to get every historical detail right so she can spin stories that make her readers feel like they’re living under the Caesars themselves.

To connect with Carol and learn more about her books, please visit:

Blog: The Beauty of Truth (https://carol-ashby.com)
History website: Life in the Roman Empire: Historical Fact and Fiction (https://carolashby.com)